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John R
Member

since 2000-12-14

Posts 141
Toledo OH

0 posted 2000-12-30 02:32 AM

When Lovers Part

O night of passions bliss,
remembered from the night gone by.
Lovers embrace and steal a kiss,
before they say good by.
They pull away, both promise this;
My love will forever stay.
Their time together they would miss,
but both will remember this day.
He backs away from her embrace,
a tear falls from her eye.
He puts his hand to her face
and also starts to cry.
He takes her in his arms once more
and there he holds her tight.
Again he whispers the oath he swore,
while making love that night.
You are the one that I adore,
no other shall there be.
Don’t fear for me, I implore,
our love will last through eternity.
He lingers on, afraid to part,
his tears wet her hair.
He speaks of love from his heart,
touches her head and says; I’ll be there.
Just close your eyes and I’ll close mine
and there we will be.
Our bodies will entwine,
and our memories we will see.

If a dream touches us, it exists to us as anything else that touches us.
John

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

1 posted 2000-12-30 03:42 AM

Very sad but wonderfully passionate and tender....the night of love well described!
Good writing!

Nan

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

2 posted 2000-12-30 09:26 AM

How wonderfully romantic... This is the way it is all too often... Nice job, my friend..

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2000-12-30 09:40 AM

JohnR~
Yes ... that's the way it is -
and the memories stay.

'Just close your eyes and I’ll close mine
and there we will be.'

Most enjoyable.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2000-12-30 10:03 AM

excellent. . .

I liked this one a lot. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

5 posted 2000-12-30 10:39 AM

Sad, tender, romantic, beautiful!

Denise

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