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| Open Poetry #11 |
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To Paula - Of Fallen Sparrows |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania 
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Thank you Paula again for your beautiful poem. It touched me deeply and so I respond with this poem To Paula - Of Fallen Sparrows Paula, you have warmed a heart That witnessed love and life depart And in your words were interlaced Essence devine to be embraced A fallen sparrow in the wind Is but a pluck of violin A single note within the song A valid part of life’s belong It is for us to learn to fly The given pathway in the sky One falls in red of sunset's light We carry on in feathered flight And though the well's soft waters seep In little drops of sorrow’s weep There comes a season of relief When God has winessed our belief And never will the spirit roam Til God has called his sparrows home Elizabeth Santos |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Lady Liz...thank you...you dont know how much this means to me |
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John R Member
since 2000-12-14
Posts 141Toledo OH |
This is really beautiful Liz. If a dream touches us, it exists to us as anything else that touches us. John |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Wonderful reply to a very sweet and sensitive poet...I know she will love this reply Elizabeth....... "And never will the spirit roam Til God has called his sparrows home." Too true and so beautiful!! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
So Beautiful... |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Such a beautiful response Liz...simply exquisite Love Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
This is beautiful. "His" eye is on the sparrow... Hugs, Deb |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, A beautiful poetic reply. Love Sy |
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