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Harboring Heights |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Harboring Heights I safeguard these moments of high natural and not otherwise so the moment stays fresh in my mind I want to recall the sing of my heart the kick start in my memories the feel of the real for you have taken me to a height that I would normally avert ~ not now somehow you make this height come real, be right and giddy bubbles O see me fly high in my mind's sigh come sky with me and write in clouds aloud I love you! Can it be in this heart of me to harbor heights of fantasy just for we? Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I DO see you fly high, sunshine, and it's a beautiful sight! Very nicely done, miss!  |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ Really nicely written. 'come sky with me' Ahhhhhhh ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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John R Member
since 2000-12-14
Posts 141Toledo OH |
I love this stanza. Beautiful!! Can it be in this heart of me to harbor heights of fantasy just for we? If a dream touches us, it exists to us as anything else that touches us. John |
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SEA
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
 WONDERFUL!!!! -SEA |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I see those harbor heights ... Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
'Deer, right back at you with a very nice THANKS... Marge...sometimes I wonder if my play on words has any effect on others...I see that they do...thank you!... John R., thank you for pointing that out!... SEA, I'll take those smiling faces and raise you one... Interloper, glad you play along in the way of words...thank you!... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Your words each day - make my day ~S~ - I love this |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
quote: Indeed it can my friend. . . you only have to dream. . . Superb from you. . . wonderful. . . ------------------------------------------------------ < !signature--> That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl [This message has been edited by Sven (edited 12-19-2000).] |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari love, does your work have any effect, now that's a toughie?? OH YES IT DOES, comprede mon petit chou, tu et manifique et tu formidable, Ah zut alors mon cheri, tu est manifique. Well, sometimes french is the only way to reply, Mmmmm don't you agree kid? I know  I'll be good well goodish!Take care kid Majestic Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Wow! What a wonderful ride upon the wings of love through your words... enjoyed the experience! *smiles* -Tier |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Mr. Yeats, it is SO easy to make you smile...{~,^} thank you for letting me know that I do... Sven...help, I can't wake up!...LOL...thank you!... Marsha, I'm going to have to take French all over again, because YES it is a wonderful way to respond! Merci!... Thank you Tiersdin... |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
what an expression of the high from love. Robert |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Harboring heights, such a beautiful thought! This is lovely, Karilea!! Denise |
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