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the touch of your hand. . .
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the touch of your hand. . . |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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Gallery Special Exhibit Doreen's "Please Write Me" Challenge I close my eyes and the dream begins and I'm there, at first I'm alone then from behind me comes your voice the wind sings your name to my heart and then I feel it, the touch of your hand flowing like silk across my face drying the tears of my heart's loss the warmth coming from you into me bringing back life and love to a cold heart and then I know it, the touch of your hand as it takes my hand into it slowly and softly you lead me to our favorite place there's no one else around, just you and I you whisper softly into my ear, "I love you" and then I love it, the touch of your hand and your lips touch mine like a tender flame I can smell the flowers in your soft hair and you lean your head on my shoulder our dance begins once more my love, my heart and all this from the touch of your hand the sun rises the dream ends but I still feel the touch of your hand. . . --------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This is fantastic!!!!!!!! "Every man dies. Not every man truly lives." Braveheart Kathleen |
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Angel_of_Music Junior Member
since 1999-07-25
Posts 35Sanger, TX USA |
Sven, from one romantic heart to another, *dreamy sigh* Beautiful. "In sleep he sang to me...in dreams he came...that voice which calls to me, and speaks my name..." |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You do not wear the Crown of Romance lightly my friend...well done... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
very beautiful Sven *s ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
the touch of your hand ((sigh)) ahhh the warmth and the feeling of such a touch from someone we love. Sven this is so incredibly beautiful my friend...well done ~HUG~ Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
Sven, You've certainly won victory on this challenge. Beautiful! Much love, Elise |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
oh sven....these is wonderful...love that soft touch. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
So lovely, what wonderful thoughts. Now if only they were not just dreams... Happy New Year Sandra |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Kathleen, thank you. . . glad that you liked. . .  Angel, right back at you. . . the world needs more Romantic hearts. . . thank you. . . Sunshine, methinks that the crown may have been wrested from mine hands. . . but I intend to win it back! Thank you my friend. . . . Wynter, thank you. . . tracie, indeed, a touch is all that we need. . . thank you for your words. . . Elise, thank you so much. . . I'm glad that you liked it. . . Charisma, thank you, I'm finding it again. . . Sandra, I'm waiting for that day when I wake up and the dream continues. . . I know that it will come. . . never stop believing. . . thank you. . . ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oh this is lovely Sven enjoyed it very much Maree "If my words could blanket the skies and fill every corner and crevice of this earth, still this wouldn't be enough" "Maree Russo" |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
beautiful Sven... Greeneyes~ *** "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sven~ This is inspiration at it's best ! Doreen will be so pleased. You sure know how to grab a thought and squeeze it ! WONDERFUL ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Challenge well met you master of romance you! This is so loving and yet so lonely at the end, but beautiful just the same Melissa The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* I think I have just melted from the inside out. This is incredibly beautiful and romantic. I love it, dear friend. Much love and a kiss for the New Year from me to you. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://www.voy.com/7622/ http://www.powerpoems.com |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
WOW!!!!!!!!the touch of a hand.... how very lovely... you have touched my heart with this one, Sven... hey! i think i'll beg to be written more often... lol.... i love it!!! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is soft and beautiful, Sven! Lovely indeed! Denise |
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