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The Question |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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The Question she stands like obsolete obsidian, an obstacle in his path ~ don't you think her obstinacy would relate to his requisite wrath? |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I don't know. . . you would think. . . good question. . . -------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
A very good question indeed Sunshine  Maree "If my words could blanket the skies and fill every corner and crevice of this earth, still this wouldn't be enough" "Maree Russo" |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Seems like he is the obstacle to her happiness. She should get out of his path for good and move on. But she's too obstinant. And this is so obsolete. Liz |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
It is too early in the morning for such riddles, I guess only she can answer that question. Really enjoyed the poem. Myabe she could ask the audience, or phone a friend ( sorry bad joke) It's in your eyes a fire that's wild and glorious Unhibited, unfinished in everything I do Let the morning rise like our hearts desire" whipping boy |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari love, if he had any sense he'd walk around her! But he hasn't so they end up waiting for the other to make a move. Wonderful love, absolutely wonderful Take care Majestic Marsha  be good Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
No longer in use old fashioned dark natural glass formed by the cooling of molten rays! Her fixed and unyeilding position or opinion despite reason or persuasion would relate to his required necessary violent anger rage. Yep you got it sweetie it would! You're so clever sometimes it just amazes me! |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Definitely time to decide if one is going to 'fish or cut bait' too much time has passed allowing the formation of the anger and the obsidian. Change does not require self destruction for either party. Perhaps counseling where hopefully 'real listening' is learned - too many years left to waste them in such obsinate/anger pursuits. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh my, how to the point this is. I feel this 100%. Peace Sandra |
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kindasorta Member
since 2000-12-02
Posts 56 |
THE ANSWER: she stand like a stubborn roadblock because he is deceitful in his accusations about her she has moved on but will not withdraw from demanding from him that he remove his claws from her granting her freedom from him and his continued presence twenty four hours each day the answer is remove yourself from my life you are free to speak lies give me freedom and your wish will be granted signed: the obstacle ps: what does obsidian mean? |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Or possibly he doesn't notice that it is her own dedication to doing what she is expected to do to please others and put herself last. Good question in this one and I feel that I will have to dwell on it some more to have any hope of an appropriate answer. |
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