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Startime
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0 posted 2000-12-29 09:04 PM


Passion's Flame

I
am
hot
with
wants
desires
burning
though me
lighting blood
setting me aflame
filling veins with love
setting my heart on fire
as I dream of your arms
pulling me into your chest
kissing my lips with passion
softly whispering your love
lighting of passion's flame
saying with gentleness
I Love You

Karen TorbiakĀ©
2000


© Copyright 2000 Karen Torbiak - All Rights Reserved
Sven
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1 posted 2000-12-29 09:07 PM


Karen,

I LOVE THIS!!!

It's wonderful. . . and I love the presentation. . . just perfect!!

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


ethome
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2 posted 2000-12-30 05:06 AM


Very very clever Karen and I love the words to phrases...well done my friend!!
Nan
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3 posted 2000-12-30 09:20 AM


Wonderful... Passionately Well done, Star... I like it..
Startime
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4 posted 2000-12-30 09:46 PM


Sven
Thank you so much, sweet man. High praise from one I respect so much. Much love and a New Years kiss from me to you.

Eric
How delightful to hear your words. Dear friend, I am glad you liked it. Much love and a New Years kiss from me to you.

Nan
Thank you so much, dear one. It was interesting to try and write. The words seemed to fit by themselves. Much love and a New Years hug to you from me.

Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams.
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Lady Lightning
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5 posted 2000-12-31 12:04 PM


Very good, Karen....I really liked this one..Hugs and Happy New Year to you.. ~LL~

The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown

Mark Bohannan
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6 posted 2000-12-31 12:10 PM


Wow...another picture poem to enjoy.  Very well done my friend and I myself find that I am drawn to a flame within "passions voice".  HAPPY NEW YEAR TO YOU!!!!  
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7 posted 2000-12-31 12:21 PM


*wow* Karen....what a lovely form and love it all.....wonderful done.

Happy newyear my friend for you and your family.

(((hugs)))
Charisma

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8 posted 2000-12-31 03:43 PM


LL
Big New Years hugs to you too, dear one. Much love from me to you.

Mark
WOW!!Yes I see that you do have interest in a Passions Voice. Much luck to you both. Much love and New Years hugs to both of you from me.

Charisma
Thank you so much, dear one. Much love and New Years hugs to you from me.

Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams.
http://www.voy.com/7622/
http://www.powerpoems.com

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