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Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
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0 posted 2000-12-29 06:32 PM


Watch for the sun to see when done


Kethry gave the man a poke
And brought him to his feet
Blood bought, he faced the crowd and spoke
But could not concede defeat

Nakdthoughts and Toerag
Came to complete the throng
With axes, knives and stone bags
That held the sacred song

Pandora came with closed up box
What horrors were inside?
The victim cowering as a fox,
would no more her taste deride.

The battle joined was loud and swift
With ferocious, biting word
No more poetry as a gift
But as a wielded sword

Blood it flowed so freely
Upon the battle field
The sun was bright and steely
With neither side prepared to yield

The day was hastening onward
This day of trial and doubt
And as the earth moved moon-ward
The crowd began to shout

Emperor Ron stood in the stand
The battle now was done
With both side bloodied, in demand
Glistening in the setting sun

All the warriors injured
In mind and some in flesh
The victim seemed to be inured
In reality he was blest

The night began to gather
The day was closing fast
To make amends they all would rather
See this day go past

To be continued…



Religion is for people frightened about going to hell - Spirituality is for people who have been there. Anon.


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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
1 posted 2000-12-29 07:02 PM


Nakdthoughts and Toerag
Came to complete the throng
With axes, knives and stone bags
That held the sacred song

I am following along...but if only I knew who this Toerag  was..and did you say thong?  whoops sorry... my mistake

I will have to  respond to  LJ  myself...am working up to it but you, Kethry, are doing a wonderful job  huggzz

~Wynter


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



Kethry
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2 posted 2000-12-29 07:14 PM


Nakdthoughts
toerag is a sometimes poet who comes and goes like the wind. Btw Don't mention thongs around him he has a thing about them.
Thanks
Keth


Religion is for people frightened about going to hell - Spirituality is for people who have been there. Anon.


Balladeer
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3 posted 2000-12-29 07:20 PM


Toerag cam with NakedThoughts? He ALWAYS comes with naked thoughts!!!!
Wynter...you wish you knew who Toerag was? Do you wish you knew what the Beubonic Plague was? How about the Great Flood? The Depression? That would be close.....

Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
4 posted 2000-12-29 07:28 PM


Sorry deer
freudian slip. lol.in fact ROTFLMAO
Keth


Religion is for people frightened about going to hell - Spirituality is for people who have been there. Anon.


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