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Blues from me (in the key of "e") |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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you never did feel love for me everything was just a dream you move with such simplicity a lover's heart, a stroke of keys backspace of disparity a lover, new--she's taunting- sweet-- oozing of sincerity distraction of reality a spotlight, proving you to be epitomy's totality-- a single tear of heart in weep. I pray my swollen eyes can sleep, and see past this absurdity... I pray. I pray, upon my knees while cursing my stupidity. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Serenity~ I thought I heard you calling ~ Holding you in *hugs* ~*Me*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
serenity, you write it, you fight it, you cry it, you try it, you feel it, you steal it but when it's gone, for it you long. Be real, and heal *HuGS* Kethry Religion is for people frightened about going to hell - Spirituality is for people who have been there. Anon. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Sending my hugs to you as well my friend. This one tore my heart out. |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
There is nothing stupid about love. I hope you find a way to heal your broken heart. Melton |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Ummm ... so your writing fiction now huh? MUST BE CUZ YA AINT STUPID ... dont make me walk there on me lips to tell ya  "distraction of reality" see ... theres the proof... very wise me sweet moth twin ... love doesnt make us stupid ... blind perhaps..in need perhaps...even weak .. but not stupid ... besides stupid isnt a very poetic word what rhymes with stupid... cupid??? ACK--nevermind... Naive is a much prettier word ... lots of words rhyme with it too oh forget poetry for a while... lets go shopping me twin... I hear the mall has a sale on singe proof mascara *winkiewinkie* baby.. SMILE me sweet ...K???? me loves ya Some people find subtlety in strangers if you find anything~let me in Your eyes~you see everything my eyes~I see it all together now~and I know |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
thank you for this one, Serenity< !signature--> "Every man dies. Not every man truly lives." Braveheart Kathleen [This message has been edited by Irish Rose (edited 12-29-2000).] |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Absolutly stunning, Think you open up so wide in this one. Thanks Rich |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
i've tried to write a response to this 3x and keep deleting it and starting over... there's so much i want to say about it... but no words to say it properly... let me just say you touched my heart..... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
sing on serenity. . . sing on. . . ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
HUGs to forum---and Janet Marie? you made me choke on my hot chocolate...stupid cupid, indeed...lol...I love ya girl! |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
serenity...ain't it funny how knowing we're stupid never stops us?? I got a membership card waitin' for ya |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
I pray. I pray, upon my knees while cursing my stupidity. oooh Hon, many many hugs  Maree "If my words could blanket the skies and fill every corner and crevice of this earth, still this wouldn't be enough" "Maree Russo" |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Ahhhhhhh, this is soooooo sad, Serenity. HUGS Very well expressed. Denise |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Seems we're writing the same wavelength Serenity...be well... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
m'deer...how's that famous commercial go? "I'm not just the president, I'm also a member..." smiling again, m'friend, thank you. Maree, we seem to bookends of depression these days...and wish us luck (play-off game today...) I'll be burping beer and cursing with the big dawgs today...lol d? Thank you so much, your kindness is always appreciated...hugs back! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
you sneaked by me there, but it's okay...I love a little sunshine sneaking into my morning...good morning, friend! Thank you! |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Gee K...somehow I can relate lovey hugs you  K |
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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
Serenity, Oh, but how I can relate! What beauty and sadness this paints for us all. Your words are a moving tribute to all who have endured those emotions. Wishing you well, Elise |
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