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Charismatic Charisma |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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 Charismatic Charisma in sight of a silver sliver of moon I think of you as you hang your charisma for all to see ~ slightly influentially ~ and powerful in your quiet roar you feign some interest and nothing more except thy forceful impact of your thoughts succumbs in their reign as your words are read again and again as your entreaties of appeal beckon with seductive zeal and with crook of charm compel the strongest of women to revel in your read and of your words then read again and wonder when this vigorous force will take it's course directly into their heart Ahhh…. thus, 'tis you. The upbeat stroke that you provoke of thy heart, thy active stance of promised romance might one simply take a chance is heartily imparted. thus, 'tis you. Now while thee may not be glamour bound, but sometimes clown, it can be said the potency in which you wrap your words, you see, is the charismatic chemistry and thus the ink of thee. 28 December 2000 [This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 12-28-2000).] |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
oh yes!!! Perfect. . . just wonderful. . . Have I said enough??  ------------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari love, this is as always an absolutely wonderfully written piece. It is absolutely spot on. Utterly wonderful love it really and truly is. Take care Majestic Marsha Oh and I love it I really do  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Allow me to agree with Sven...... it's excellent, sunshine |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sven, yes... Marsha, dear, blame my muse... 'Deer, thank you... |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
oh my......never thought that I could be soooooo Charismatic... I have read this one several times, its so beautiful and I want to make a thread. love it sunshine. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sis, boy did you catch Sven's bug in a big way!!! Beautiful soo beautiful. write on Kethry Religion is for people frightened about going to hell - Spirituality is for people who have been there. Anon. |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Charisma, I am SO glad you like this one...thank you... Keth, I didn't know Sven was infectious...ahchoo!...excuse me!...LOL... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ Charisma captured charmingly. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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