»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #11
»
just because thoughts
| Open Poetry #11 |
|
just because thoughts |
|
|
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
|
Because time has its moments and is passing me by today I had a few loving thoughts I wanted to express... I love you enough to have opened up my heart and soul to you, despite the secrets you kept within... I love you enough (although hard at times) to stay away from you, to hold back my loving words, allowing you to stay safe in the darkness, of your shadow's hold... I love you enough to release you, if wanted or needed, freeing you from the weight of my worries... I love you enough to have you always in my thoughts tucked away sometimes but other times, overflowing and running off my finger tips, to the blue heaven upon which I place them, so you can see how I feel, feel what I see moment to moment day to day weak to strong and back again... I love you enough... with just because thoughts... as I kiss you " well" within my heart. ~Wynter < !signature--> "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 12-28-2000).] |
||
| © Copyright 2000 Wynter Bliss - All Rights Reserved | |||
catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Wynter, you said it all for me once again. Very stunning. Sandra |
||
|
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
thank you Sandra, I think we live parallel to each other at times...*s ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
||
|
Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
This is beautiful Wynter, tender and sensitive and so genuine, thanks for sharing.  |
||
|
Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
true love is so unselfish and you showed a lot of that love. penned with love, wonderful piece. ((hugs)) Charisma |
||
|
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Beki...thank you for the visit...I was in a contemplative mood today...just thinking how I love... ~softsmiles ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
||
|
Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
apparently you love quite well...this is wonderful...I believe when one allows their thoughts to roam, the prettiest poetry is written then... |
||
|
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Charisma..thank you, I feel everything I write before I write it and yes this truly came from my heart. Sunshine...I agree, and roaming, my thoughts have been...I need something to warm me in this winter blast here..*s thank you both, your words are always appreciated ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
||
|
Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
very lovely Wynter..beautifully writtten HUGS ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
||
|
serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
beautiful...your heart is a bit like that famous timex commercial....lol still have a fever so if that didn't make any sense? forgive me. But I loved your thoughts in this one. |
||
|
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
~V~..I enjoyed writing this one...just because  huggzz~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
||
|
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
serenity is that timex commercial the one that says it keeps on ticking? I am old but not sure if that is the one you meant and I hope you are feeling better..huggzz~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
||
|
Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
yes, sometimes when you truly love you have to do something that takes a great deal of strength. Enjoyed this one. "Every man dies. Not every man truly lives." Braveheart Kathleen |
||
|
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Kathleen the strength lies in "not controlling" but in "loving freely"....and enough to allow it to leave if that is the best for both...but I am not looking at an old love..just possibilities of a new one and how I would feel...huggzz ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
||
|
ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Oh this one is classic Wynter! Beautifully written with that soft warm depth of perception that you employ.... I always said watch out for those smooth soft spoken ones they turn into tigers when you feed them love the way they like it...whew...just because thoughts eh? yeh just because I love this poem...yep! |
||
|
suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I like this one very much... it's lovely!!! Well done! |
||
|
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
E!!!! "I always said watch out for those smooth soft spoken ones they turn into tigers when you feed them love the way they like it...whew...just because thoughts eh? " well some day some one shall see that tiger in my tank thank you once again and again..*s ~Wynter suthern- glad you stopped in to read ..and that you could enjoy my words .. ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
||
|
Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Wonderful write and well-written too! Nathan |
||
|
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
love the name Nathan..always have..thank you for your nice response ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
