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Sven
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0 posted 2000-12-27 09:29 PM


in a bright boltflash
in the sky like a nova
right there! then she's gone

but you remember
you remember the brightness
it sticks in your mind

that's when again
you see the bright boltflash there
it's just like always

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2000-12-28 01:21 AM


Sven~
She is quick - but you nailed her to a T !

And remember her brightness, we do .
~*Marge*~


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Kethry
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2 posted 2000-12-28 02:55 AM


Sven,
not fair I was gonna say that! Now I have to change my whole tribute.
Write on
Kethry


Religion is for people frightened about going to hell - Spirituality is for people who have been there. Anon.


tracie66
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3 posted 2000-12-28 04:21 AM


Sven perfect tribute to our little spits   well said
Tracie~


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It is the harmony of the universe



ethome
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4 posted 2000-12-28 06:01 AM


Wonderful tribute Sven and I'd say the whole concept captured very well!!
catalinamoon
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5 posted 2000-12-28 07:44 AM


Sven, I like this a lot, she is all this and more.
Sandra

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6 posted 2000-12-28 01:09 PM


I've missed a lot of these I know.  But you seem to know your subjects so well.  It's amazing.



passion is life. . . ~Diana


Elizabeth Santos
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7 posted 2000-12-28 07:03 PM


A poet named spitfire joins the gallery with flash and a vision of what we remember.
Spitfire, you are blazing
WEll done,Sven
Liz

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8 posted 2000-12-28 07:35 PM


Sven...you are very astute...that's our girl! and how blessed we are for her thoughtful walks through the forum...bravo to you, and brava, to me girl!
Sven
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9 posted 2000-12-28 07:37 PM


Marge, thank you my friend. . .

Kethry, who says that you have to change yours??  Thank you. . .

tracie, thank you my friend. . .  

ethome, glad that it all worked out. . . thank you!!

Sandra, you are right!!  Thank you. . .

PV, thank you for that amazing. . . good to see you back. . .

Liz, thank you my friend, she does burn brightly. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


SpitFire
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10 posted 2000-12-30 03:21 PM


~Sven,...how cool! Heehee. I feel so, so I don't know. How neat. Thanks. Made me smile. A treat. Thank you. *Peace.
Charisma
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11 posted 2000-12-30 03:38 PM


wonderful flashing words my friend....love this wonderful tribute.

((hugs))
Charisma


Nate Dogg
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12 posted 2000-12-30 05:29 PM


Wonderful imagery and wonderful tribute to Spitfire!

Nathan

athena4
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13 posted 2000-12-30 06:36 PM


Sven,
   The "boltflash" is always there. It's that feeling that keeps us writing, and loving. Beautiful!
           Much love, Elise

EagleOne
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14 posted 2000-12-30 07:31 PM


This has been a most excellent series of poems you have penned. Well done once again!

"The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest"
~ My Angel.



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