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Open Poetry #11

I'd never ever say...

Bilal
Member

since 2000-12-13

Posts 66

0 posted 2000-12-27 05:22 PM

I'd never ever say...
Lancelot © 12/2000

I'd never ever say 'no' to you
I'd never ever say why not
I'd never ever say get away
I'd never ever say to where
I'd never ever say how could you
I'd never ever say for whom
I'd never ever say what made you
I'd never ever say why did you
I'd never ever say where were you
I'd never ever say how did you
I'd never ever say for what
I'd never ever say who did it
I'd never ever say you hurt me
I'd never ever say that I care!

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2000-12-27 05:57 PM

wow..I'd never want to use that word so many times in a poem *s...it certainly has it's effect

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

2 posted 2000-12-27 06:20 PM

I know you'd say you cared if you really did because you're a poet. Never is the longest word in the world...........like the many points made and enjoyed the read!!

Bilal
Member

since 2000-12-13

Posts 66

3 posted 2000-12-28 01:53 PM

Thank you very much for commenting. Yes, never is the longest word!
Bilal

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