Open Poetry #11 |
the dead pen |
ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
the dead pen so, tell me again where it is written again, tell me where print is falling off paper if alive today, they would say to i and you, the beguiled in my death and after a family i've never seen greets me yet, if the birds could fly so high as to brush their wings m.a. miller |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
wow..this is sooooo intense , I love it and am saving it to read again and again... ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Stunning! evocative! powerful write...I really got my poetic teeth into this one... remarkable! Good day MA good to read your interesting thought provoking work again! ethome |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
ahhh. . . excellent. . . makes you think. . . I like that!!! great writing. . . ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Well hi there Mark...this is an exceptional work...I especially enjoyed the last verse...its good to have you posting again my friend |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
and their deaths mean living in famous fonts There's a lot to choose from here, but I too have questions...especially of Donne (grin) but then I WOULD, wouldn't I? Well done, and welcome home. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
WOW!!!! wonderful writings...well penned Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MAMiller~ This piece is just stunning. I do believe you need to submit it to the main site ! What wonderful thoughts are these - ' if alive today, they would say to i and you, the beguiled the pieces are many, but the wholes are few and simple equals all the complications of thought and our words are still upon waters never drank and so make waves against the genius you think us to be' Indeed - indeed ! Amen - amen ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Intriging and beguiling read!!!! I agree with Marge. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Wow! Excellent writing, indeed!! Denise |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
MA Miller, Agree with poet deVine, a good read and a good write. |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
May the pen with which you write, always stay full of ink. Very good poem. Deb |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Yours is a pen of deep thought-provoking magic... an intense and fresh read! Take care, Melissa The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Wow excellent poem, and if you ever get in contact with any of these dead poets could you ask Yeats, Dylan thomas and Sylvia Plath to give me a few lessons in poetry. Really enjoyed the poem and may there be many more before your pen is finally put to rest. It's in your eyes a fire that's wild and glorious Unhibited, unfinished in everything I do Let the morning rise like our hearts desire" whipping boy |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
thanks all above for reading and surviving 'til the end of this rant ... it was to have been deleted, but i see it has a cat personae i was unaware of ... some time after i wrote this, i was reading Robert Frost's, "The Lesson for Today" ... please find this poem in your collections and read ... we, who call ourselves poets have so far to go ... so far ... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
MA--Good to see you...and I know what you mean..enjoyed this poem immensely! |
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