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Mike
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0 posted 2000-12-27 12:26 PM



I wrote Ben and Jerry's,
...with a knockout idea,
They turned me down cold,
...with my Chocolate Sangria.

But I'm not a quitter,
...sent another ice cream,
Was called Salmon-illa,
...a fisherman's dream.

Again a rejection,
...what's wrong with these guys?
They even turned down,
...Dill Pickle Surprise.

My Rhubarb and Fudge,
...would melt in your mouth,
Yet another idea,
...Ben and Jerry turned south.

So to heck with that duo,
...I'll make frozen custard,
Y'all care for a spoon,
...of my Passionate Mustard?

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SpitFire
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since 2000-04-19
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1 posted 2000-12-27 12:35 PM


~Yum! The pickle one sounds good. hmm. I think you're on to something. Cute read. *Peace.
Denise
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2 posted 2000-12-27 12:53 PM


ROFL   Very creative, Mike!

Denise

Nan
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3 posted 2000-12-28 07:51 AM


Well, if it's any consolation, I heard they just might be selling their ice cream palace... Ever been there? It's pretty awesome.... a cow gift store & everything...

How can they possibly turn down any Passionate flavor??..)

nakdthoughts
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4 posted 2000-12-28 08:44 AM


lol...very cute and made me actually laugh out aloud this morning *s
thank you
~Wynter


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



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