Open Poetry #11 |
Soft Touch Reigning Inspiration...a sonnet |
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Soft Touch Reigning Inspiration Thy words have gathered me in the silence. Mine eyes take hold, remembering of blue. Hypnotized, I shall dwell in thy deep Forever leaning, on the steady of you. Thy soft touch felt, of words kissing mine lips, So delicate the whispers of thy taste. Thoughts that hunger in the dark velvet hour, Await the moment, surrendering chaste. To press you to mine wants, listening stirs The self of me, intent upon your heart. Yesterday, I embraced thee in my mind This day, desires else, than just a part. Thou art the inspiration of soft touch Confronting myst of tears, of loving much. ~Wynter thanks to several on here whose words inspired me today, Rex, John and Kethry and I am sure others I just can't recall at the moment... "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Beautiful sonnet inspired from the hearts and pens of others. Wonderful read my friend. Nice to see inspiration flowing still in these pages of blue. A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses. author unknown |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I write from inspiration Mark...from your words and that of others i read and in my mind they stir my thoughts to write..I never am blocked ..I may be weary or not in the mood but words never fail me...*s huggz ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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John R Member
since 2000-12-14
Posts 141Toledo OH |
This is beautiful and well penned Wynter. It was trult a pleasure to read. I love the archic as you well know. If a dream touches us, it exists to us as anything else that touches us. John |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
thank you John, your words had inspired me this morning *s huggzz and I have a friend on another site who is the queen of sonnets and writes in this style... ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I know how you write so freely as I have read your work for a long time and I really think you have a wonderful gift for that. On top of that your work is so well done and I think you deserve that compliment because I know that you wrote over 600 poems one year. It's not like you're a hallmark factory or something like that because your writing is so clever and it just flows from your gift. I just thought I'd like to say/write that right here in front of everyone because that's how I feel. Write on dear poet lady.....Wynter (MC) |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
you handle the sonnet form beautifully - (Love the Pic too ~S~) |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
E...thank you for the many compliments you have placed for me here plus all those you share each time you respond to me. I have always admired your writings from bop and was happy to see you, a familiar face, when I came here. As you know me, I love a challenge, included in that are the many walls (and anons) I come up against. I do try to express myself to relieve many inner feelings and sometimes not to the best of my ablities. But with "friendships" such as yours and others I have made, poetry has become a part of me now and I don't think it will stop unless forced to. Whether Once in a...Blue Moon, M/Moonchild, Velvet Eyes, Maureen or ~Wynter Bliss, my naked thoughts will be exposed in each poem I write and post. Thank you again, for being you. ~softsmiles, always "All"of Me "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
thank you Bill..sonnets are a challenge that's for sure so when one of my poems turns that direction I allow it to complete itself..and am often surprised when it is done...glad you liked the "me" yousee.. ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Evening Wynter, It is so good to see you back with these beautiful writings that you are doing. Soft, sensual, and romantic they are. Capturing through your writings, as they are read. BC |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Soft, sensual, and romantic hmmmmmmmm nice...thank you BC ~softsmiles~ ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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