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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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I was your true desire your freedom to be you I was your girl of fire our love made life feel new. You were my dreamt of passion my knight from realms of old you offered me such magic but left me in the cold. Now you're just a memory and I'm someone you knew A little touch of heaven when I am feeling blue. And yet, do you remember my touch of crimson wine? Or has your heart forgotten the days when you were mine? When coldness lives within you and love has gone to stay, will you think back with longing and dream our better days? [This message has been edited by catalinamoon (edited 12-26-2000).] |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I hope there are better days to come, Moon...the past can't be all there is...huggzz...nice writing *s ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Saxoness
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102Texas |
Stunning! I love your verse, it's great. Good job  "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me." |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
You write the heart's memories so well... love it Pepper "A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth." Percy Bysshe Shelley |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
cat~ So very well penned, flowed beautifully and the visions just wonderful...well done Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
CatalinaMoon~ I so enjoy the memories written in the heart - 'has your heart forgotten the days when you were mine?' A lovely piece, my friend ... ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Nicely penned. Enjoyed your poetry. |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
Lovely. very lovely..... |
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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
Sandra, Very beautiful. Remember, it's going to be a new year to make that dream come true... Love, Elise |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
*sigh* there you go again Sandra, reading over my shoulder again. . . touching my friend. . . very touching. . .but I wonder if they do remember. . . I hope so. . . ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
you have written about the loss of love so beautifully I hope that love finds you soon and blesses your heart. Take care, really enjoyed the poem. < !signature--> In the morning I am a recluse,lost in memory,ideal situations and convulsions... They built pop mart for Bono so he could gaze out across the bay and sing about mountains maybe" Whipping boy. [This message has been edited by brian madden (edited 12-28-2000).] |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nicely written |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
And yet, do you remember my touch of crimson wine? Or has your heart forgotten the days when you were mine? ============ sincere, honest touching work Cat, I believe they do remember, even if they never let us know, and Im always grateful for my own memories well written emotive poem take care jm Some people find subtlety in strangers if you find anything~let me in Your eyes~you see everything my eyes~I see it all together now~and I know |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Sandra... I know he feels your touch of crimson wine..how could he not? This is beautifully bittersweet, my friend.....a tear is waiting to fall....  Write on! -<--<--{(@ |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
no...YOU ARE.... to hell with it all, come to carnival! (((((((hugs)))))))) you are in my thoughts, m'friend... |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
this really is so touching and beautiful...I know of these feelings in which you speak....Happy Holidays with Peace... Greeneyes~ *** "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
So sadly touching. This brought back memories of my first heartbreak. I had almost forgotten him. Yep, time does heal! HUGS Denise |
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