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wayoutwalt
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0 posted 2000-12-25 09:09 PM


Someday you will die
And thus so will I
But that is stormy weather
Tonight we’ll be together

Someday dreams come true
For me... for you...
The sun will shine forever
Tonight we’ll be together

Tonight is what we’ll use
To take a lover’s cruise
The waves crash out your name
The angel’s sing the same

Tonight is alibi
For a teary eye
To be found upon my face
The rain cannot displace

Someday only love
Will pour from above
And nothing will suffice
‘Til time has paid that price

Tonight the fire’s burning
In your eyes I’m learning
That there's a crystal ball
Let the heavens fall






[This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 12-26-2000).]

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Irish Rose
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1 posted 2000-12-26 05:26 AM


uh huh, yeah!!!!!!!!

"Love is a fire. But whether it is going to warm your hearth or burn down your house, you can never tell."
Joan Crawford

ethome
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2 posted 2000-12-26 05:39 AM


Right on Walt! Let'em fall...beautiful poem you smooth writer you!
wayoutwalt
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3 posted 2000-12-26 09:21 AM


thank you guys muchly yuh
elisaseyes
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4 posted 2000-12-26 10:07 PM


No hubby I'll make sure you go first hehe.
cruz
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5 posted 2000-12-26 10:38 PM


I've been thinkin' some of this stuff!! Of course, not many can spit it out like theeee.  Meltingly Stupendous! "Magically Delicious!"
Mike
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6 posted 2000-12-26 10:43 PM


nicely written... enjoyed.
wayoutwalt
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7 posted 2000-12-27 08:30 AM


thank you so much wife cruz pal and good ole mikey!
emily
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8 posted 2000-12-27 08:35 AM


I ain't dying yet!   Liked this!!!

Emily


wayoutwalt
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9 posted 2000-12-27 03:47 PM


thanks emily big smiles to you
Sunshine
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10 posted 2000-12-27 04:11 PM


humm, and isn't December a timely time
for a meteor shower, hey?
methinks I'll watch the stars tonight
just to see the heavens shine...

Nan
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11 posted 2000-12-28 07:42 AM


Live for the moment, my friend... It's the only guarantee we've got!!..
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