Open Poetry #11 |
Let the heaven's fall |
wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
Someday you will die And thus so will I But that is stormy weather Tonight we’ll be together Someday dreams come true For me... for you... The sun will shine forever Tonight we’ll be together Tonight is what we’ll use To take a lover’s cruise The waves crash out your name The angel’s sing the same Tonight is alibi For a teary eye To be found upon my face The rain cannot displace Someday only love Will pour from above And nothing will suffice ‘Til time has paid that price Tonight the fire’s burning In your eyes I’m learning That there's a crystal ball Let the heavens fall [This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 12-26-2000).] |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
uh huh, yeah!!!!!!!! "Love is a fire. But whether it is going to warm your hearth or burn down your house, you can never tell." Joan Crawford |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Right on Walt! Let'em fall...beautiful poem you smooth writer you! |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
thank you guys muchly yuh |
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elisaseyes Member
since 1999-07-15
Posts 196fort worth texas |
No hubby I'll make sure you go first hehe. |
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cruz Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 282Dallas,Texas USA |
I've been thinkin' some of this stuff!! Of course, not many can spit it out like theeee. Meltingly Stupendous! "Magically Delicious!" |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
nicely written... enjoyed. |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
thank you so much wife cruz pal and good ole mikey! |
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emily Member
since 2000-10-03
Posts 142USA |
I ain't dying yet! Liked this!!! Emily |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
thanks emily big smiles to you |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
humm, and isn't December a timely time for a meteor shower, hey? methinks I'll watch the stars tonight just to see the heavens shine... |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Live for the moment, my friend... It's the only guarantee we've got!!.. |
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