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Believe It Or Not
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Believe It Or Not |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Believe It Or Not Our love was born a misty morn That day of days, I was reborn. Reached across to hold her hand and A branding iron burned its brand. I called to her, I spoke her name By that first sound, I struck a flame. Then sank into two pools of green Went down three times and died serene. My soul pulled down by pure unique By green eyes full of pure mystique. I floated in a bear of flair And had no sense of what or where. Came up into a sun lit bay Ecstasy in the light of day. And there upon the shore she stood Exactly as I thought she would. And I have been there ever since She my queen and I her prince. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Sounds like the perfect place to stay to me and from what I have read in your poetry...you are a prince indeed. Wonderful write and so glad that I found time today to read in here. This one makes it worth it all alone. A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses. author unknown |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
This made me feel good Seymour, a very beautiful poem  Loved it! Maree "If my words could blanket the skies and fill every corner and crevice of this earth, still this wouldn't be enough" "Maree Russo" |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
For a split second, I believe I saw her standing upon the shore. Does she have blond hair? |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I wish I could believe it, but sadly, I don't. Good write, but seems like fantasy to me right now at this point in my life |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
you write beautifully ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Reached across to hold her hand and A branding iron burned its brand. ===================== Then sank into two pools of green Went down three times and died serene. ================== My soul pulled down by pure unique By green eyes full of pure mystique. ================ Came up into a sun lit bay Ecstasy in the light of day. And there upon the shore she stood Exactly as I thought she would. And I have been there ever since She my queen and I her prince. =============== Love built a castle in the sand upon a beach of understand phasing moons mark time in pull of tides there love sustains two ... side by side *winkiewinkie* prince stinky  me Some people find subtlety in strangers if you find anything~let me in Your eyes~you see everything my eyes~I see it all together now~and I know |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This is wonderful Sy! [This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 12-27-2000).] |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
thank you for a fine poem "Love is a fire. But whether it is going to warm your hearth or burn down your house, you can never tell." Joan Crawford |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Seymour--Wonderful writing. A pleasure to read. Poeminister "...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls- O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love." -Poe |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Seymour I really like that, "I floated in a bear of flair." he he didn't we all? "You hung around kept my feet on the ground when I acted as proud as a fool." that happen to you? and now The frostking has come and with a flick of his thumb, turned our windows to renaissance art. As we sit by the fire with no need to inquire, about the ways of the soul and the heart. The years passed us by like a soft whispered sigh, not noticing youth as it flew. But it's easy to tell you wear your age well, not having to prove you're still you." song by Valdy Great poem Seymour a true poets pen you carry in your mind!! take care ethome |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Mark, Thank you for the read and nice comment. Dark Angel, Thank you angel. Eagle, As a matter of fact yes. Passing, Never discount fantasy, thank you. Wynter, Thanks for the beautiful. JM, Your poem was beautiful. Winkiewinkie Stinky. Irish, You are welcome and thank you for the read. Poe, Always a pleasure to have you read them. Ethome, Wonderful comment and quote. Thank you. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful poem, Seymour! Lovely! Denise |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ You are such an enlightened soul. Wonderful words from you that bring me a smile. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dsnyder, Thank you for the read and nice comment. Marge, Always enjoy your comments. *L* |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
"Came up into a sun lit bay Ecstasy in the light of day. And there upon the shore she stood Exactly as I thought she would. And I have been there ever since She my queen and I her prince." absolutely priceless.... lovely lovely writing.... and you know what?.... i believe it! |
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