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Your Lips
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Your Lips |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Your Lips By: Noah Eaton When I see your sweet lips smile at me, I know that you are thinking of me I look at you and I could see you as a beautiful angel, unfolding your wings to share your thoughts with me And I begin to sing to you a lovely serenade, straight from my heart, and your lips smile as I sing this song "My thoughts of you whisper through my heart like a swarm of honeybees, Wanting to climb into your heart and share a love with you that’s as sweet as honey Let me embrace my heart with yours, let me be the sunshine of your heart Let us become one, let my breath of love for you be the match that lights the candle of your heart And together, our hearts are lit with a flame of true beautiful love that glows for all eternity Let me hold you close to my heart, let our hearts beat together with this magical rhythm of love that sings happily Let my body and soul melt together with yours, let our voices be the same ones that ring within our spirits heavenly Let us be together forever and never let go, sunrise to sunset, every summer, autumn, winter, and spring You are the dove that nests deep inside my soul, your wings and feathers warm me all day long For I will always love you, you will always be in my heart, all life long… Your lips smile most happily as you sigh lovingly, and then you begin to express your love for me Your lips move with beauty and love and grace as I hear you speak such majestic words from your heart Straight out from your lovely lips, which fill the air with such overwhelming beauty that makes me sing with you And I slowly reach out to hold you close to me, as you whisper words to me that touch me so deeply and make me feel heaven-bound as I touch you We pull each other close together at last, and we embrace together in this kiss we have always longed for together Your lips taste so soft and sweet, sweeter than anything I could ever imagine, softer than a velvet blanket Your lips remain close to mine, your heart and body attached to me, as I wish this kiss would never end As we light each others hearts with a light of a star that shines as bright as the heavens As our lips slowly separate, I see a great happiness that doesn’t erase from your face An afterglow that luminates like the big beautiful crystal moon at twilight radiates Your lips smile widely telling me that we were meant for each other, and you would always be mine And I hold you, with our hands held together, as sweet words continue to flow from your lips…ones of purity and rhyme Copyright 2000 Noah Eaton 11/30/00 |
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Bilal Member
since 2000-12-13
Posts 66 |
Hey soulbrother I remember this poem very well. Its really beautiful and full of beauty and emotions. This girl you love whill be the most luckiest giorl on earth to have a lover like you on her side. Loved to read and re-read it. Bilal |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'As our lips slowly separate, I see a great happiness that doesn’t erase from your face An afterglow that luminates like the big beautiful crystal moon at twilight radiates Your lips smile widely telling me that we were meant for each other, and you would always be mine And I hold you, with our hands held together, as sweet words continue to flow from your lips…ones of purity and rhyme' You've penned some truly romantic lines here, Noah! Absolutely enjoyed this one!! Love this!! sp  I won't go; I won't sleep; I can't breathe until you're resting here with me... |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Man if you're not in love Noah I'll eat my mouse pad...I felt like there was fifty different love poems in this one piece. I've never read so many wonderful endearing thoughts cascading down the page out of the love waterfalls of your heart...yep! you gotta be in love DEEPLY my man...hey! enjoy the trip, there's no better.....ethome |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) sadly, this was all I felt in a dream. I've gone through one year, since I was sixteen, having these lovesick fantasies, and they truly are all beautiful dreams. I can feel the love, hear it, even smell it. But no, I am not yet in love, evetyone in my neighborhood and near me is cold, so I'm alone, except when I'm here with all you wonderful poets! Thank you all for your great comments! Sincerely, Noah Eaton |
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Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
How very,very sweet...Love is busting out everywhere with this... You may not be in love now, but when you are she better watch out..You will sweep her off her feet!!!Hugs...~LL~ The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown |
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