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spiked
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0 posted 2000-12-24 07:15 PM


Inspired by a friendship when
I look into your eyes again
Captured by the shade of green
Intrigued by all thats left unseen
Unwilling now to cross that line
Drawn by that which we built in time
Yet wonder what it is you see
When softly you confide in me
The things in life that hurt so bad
Confuse your mind and leave you sad
Not wanting you to turn away
And realize what here I say
That there is more than I can Show.
© Copyright 2000 Richard Rendall - All Rights Reserved
serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
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1 posted 2000-12-24 10:09 PM

It's always a risk....but the thing is, if you want someone to touch your soul? You gotta let them see it first...and me? grin...
I think yer beautiful!!!

hugs to you.
spiked
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Hammond, La USA
2 posted 2000-12-25 09:54 AM

Thanks Sren,
Rich
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3 posted 2000-12-25 11:37 AM

Nice thoughts!
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