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Marsha
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0 posted 2000-12-24 05:58 PM


Will She Do?

You've asked for a dream girl to put a smile on your face
P T love I've tried everyone, it seems like a hopeless case
The list of your criteria is rigorous and just a little long
And I think it's too late to find a mate to sing your song
The long auburn hair well that's not too hard to arrange
I'd give her mine actually because I could do with a change
It's long and flowing yes, but it takes forever to get it dry
I want it shorter for those times when time seems to simply fly

The eyes now they're a problem I can't find anyone at all
Can't you choose another colour into who's depths you'd fall
Mine wouldn't do, they don't stay the same from day to day
One day they are bluish and then they turn a smokey grey
Cheekbones I can do, a little blusher will give them a lift
And ruby lips are no problem, I'll give her my lippy as a gift
Complexion this being England it's either freckles or rose
Wouldn't you consider settling for either one of those

The voice I can do, it being my stock in trade so to speak
Everyone likes my voice it's neither too strong not too week
So the voice is no problem, I could offer to show her how
I promise when I finish with her all you'll find to say Oh wow
Those legs are a bit tricky could you settle for lithe instead
Because I did Yoga once and can lift mine right over my head
Now the breasts, if you want plastic then an op is the way to go
But natural which means the signs of gravity will obviously show

The slim waist is fine but what about having some real fun
If she's dieting for what else does she say 'no thanks just the one'?
Wouldn't you rather have someone who enjoys trying pleasure?
Someone keen to indulge both of you, measure for measure?
The smile, well that's easy surely you could give her that
And the assets and the condo, what if she has her own flat?
All the rest? Wouldn't you think that I was gilding the lily?
And you'll give her what? My! I thought you said, oh I am silly

If Santa can get her to you I hope you'll have a great time
But unfortunately she changes back to a dream at half past nine
It's the best I could manage with the time I had to do it all in
She may be a dream but she's fairly lively and she's keen to sin
I've asked her very sweetly to make your Christmas a special night
She's equipped with all the necessary to make you grin with delight
Actually I'd quite like to help her, but at 5' 5" I'm a bit too small
P T love, I wish you Merry Christmas and I hope you have a ball  


Marsha

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Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning




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Paula Finn
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missouri
1 posted 2000-12-24 06:05 PM


LOL well I sure dont fit any of PT's criteria...I'm only 5'2" blonde hair and blue eyes...sigh...but I'm glad you found him a dream anyway
Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

2 posted 2000-12-24 06:25 PM


very witty and clever Marsha...nice to see you enjoying your poetry ... this is very cute.
well done fun set to rhyme

and if Santa dont bring our sweet E-babes the woman of his dreams...
Im not worried...
all he has to do is tune up that guitar of his ..
and fire up that poets pen that writes such heart felt love poems and there will be a line.
Hey E-babes...I gotta a couple candles and the complete Van Morrison collection...
can I apply  teehee

later-matchmaker-gators
jm


Some people find subtlety in strangers
if you find anything~let me in
Your eyes~you see everything
my eyes~I see it all together now~and I know

ethome
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since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
3 posted 2000-12-25 02:30 AM


Hey Mushy!  YOU'RE GETTING CLOSE!

Hey JM you're tempting me with Van the man.

Marsha
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4 posted 2000-12-25 04:20 PM


Paula love, blondes have more fun love truly   although I'm always saying to my sisters that they are just cast in my shaddow. I like to promote harmony and contentment, just for the fun of it.    
Besides I gave them all a copy of The Secret as a little pressie. And they have all been swearing vengence.  
Thank you sweetie for sharing the fun, and I hope you have a great New Year. (I just know I will)
Take care
                Mushy
                    
Janet Marie, thank you love, I do appreciate it, a compliment from you is praise indeed. I hope that this coming year brings you peace, love and lots of smiles. As for E babes, I'm doing my best honestly   But well you know how difficult it is to get your hands on the ingredients for a good dream. Everyone has used them up for all those Christmas wishes.  
Take care
               Mushy
                  

P T love, Close.... is that all close!! I studied the criteria, I mixed together the right ingredients, and all I get is close. Oh love, okay I'll keep trying. Work, work, work, goodness that's a lot of work. And don't say goodness has nothing to do with it, or I'll clock you one.
Thanks for the smiles love         
Take care              
               Mushy
                  


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
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Victoria Australia
5 posted 2000-12-25 05:01 PM


Marsha,
a fairy godmother's work is never done. You could probably stop elfin' him now that Christmas is done.
Huggle Bunny - lower your standards a bit so I can get in the queue.
Kethry


Religion is for people frightened about going to hell - Spirituality is for people who have been there. Anon.


Marsha
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6 posted 2000-12-26 07:31 AM


Kethry love, with Christmas over perhaps I'll be able to get some better ingredients. And love I'm sure that you have a spot in the queue  
Thank you love
Take care
               Slushy Mushy
                      


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



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