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Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17
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missouri

0 posted 2000-12-24 05:02 PM


Please answer yes or no to the following questions

Do you like camping under starry skies
Watching the sky light up with fireflies?

Do you like an unexpected kiss
When we're apart is it me you miss?

Do you like picnics in the park
After the sun sets and its just getting dark?

Do you like cuddling in bed against the storm
And watching the sunrise on a summers morn?

Do you want a woman who is tender and true
One who will spend her days loving you?


If you answered with a resounding YES
Then maybe I'm at the end of my quest

So here's your chance to convince my heart
And win a love that will never depart

In twenty words or less lets see
If you can convince this heart and me

© Copyright 2000 Paula Finn - All Rights Reserved
maxtec1
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since 2000-12-09
Posts 577
Garland, Tx
1 posted 2000-12-24 05:27 PM


Honest integrity
Trustworthy, Loyal
Loving heart
Hopeless romantic
Tender touch
Holding hands
Long kisses
Burning passion
Lifetime commitment

hows that
Richard

Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546
missouri
2 posted 2000-12-24 05:59 PM


Perfect Richard...I like all those qualities in a man...
Marsha
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since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England
3 posted 2000-12-24 06:02 PM


Paula love, looks like you're hired kid. Love this one as always. Utterly delicious.
And after I spent all that time fixing him up too.
Love it  I really do
             Merry Christmas
                Mushy
                  


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



rascalx
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since 1999-08-25
Posts 590
Florence, SC, USA
4 posted 2000-12-25 12:17 PM


Paula,
     Where do I sign up, darling? Ok, twenty words or less:

     Butterfly flurry when we kiss
     Touching skin to skin, soul to soul
     Smile with our eyes, laugh with our
     hearts
     forever

Ok, so that's 21 words  ) Do I still pass? Beautifully written!

ethome
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since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
5 posted 2000-12-25 05:54 AM


Love, joy, peace, long-suffering, kindness, goodness, faith, mildness, self-control  and a resounding YES! The greatest of all these being LOVE!

You tricky little deviless you! You're gonna land a big catch aren't ya!

Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
6 posted 2000-12-25 11:28 AM


Sounds so like the Pina Colada song...and now I'll not have that tune out of my head all day...

Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
7 posted 2000-12-25 11:43 AM


Paula.
I like camping in the rain
I like kissing though it brings me pain
I like walking in the park
watching sunsets, holding hands in dark
I like summers and it's true
I like autumn, winter's too
But for you, could not offend
I won't be your lover could I be your friend?
together we could search the earth
each find a mate, to to give us worth
I don't know about me, YOU need no-one
to stand up tall and face the sun
Paula my dear don't sell yourself short
twenty words is too few, you to court
but if you find a man and I hope you do
remember the rejects, can before me queue  

Great poem, and like Sunshine I will have that song going through my head all day.
Kethry


Religion is for people frightened about going to hell - Spirituality is for people who have been there. Anon.


Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA
8 posted 2000-12-25 01:19 PM


Hey, Paula, I can show a love that;s true
But I must ask you...what about you?
You want me to convince your heart
But when are YOU supposed to start?

I'll show you all that you will get
Will MY requirement, too, be met?
I see what you need to live
But nothing that you're gonna give!

So let's do this in harmony
I'll tell you and you tell me
And if, by chance, a meet occurs
I'll show you mine - you show me yours!  

LOL! Just funning ya, Paula...you brought out that male chauvinist side of me that believes both sides have the responsibility of convincing the other...I HATE filling out applications!  

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263

9 posted 2000-12-26 03:24 PM


Paula, I always felt "it's in his kiss"

throw away the application!

"Love is a fire. But whether it is going to warm your hearth or burn down your house, you can never tell."
Joan Crawford

catalinamoon
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since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone
10 posted 2000-12-26 11:28 PM


I'm singing "pina Colada" now too! Great ad Paula, I think you should place it, and find the one who understands all the questions.
Sandra

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
11 posted 2000-12-26 11:50 PM


this was great Paula..and I  am enjoying the male responses especially *s

~Wynter


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



EagleOne
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since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...
12 posted 2000-12-27 01:17 AM


Ya know ya had right up until I had to write something down, ya know how I struggle with words!     Great work as always.

"The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest"
~ My Angel.


Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546
missouri
13 posted 2000-12-27 02:39 AM


Marsha...LOL well girlie yours was taking to long hehehe thanks sweetie

Rascalx...of course you pass silly....with flying colours hehehe...thank you

ethome...only one catch I want
sweet poet man....glad you said yes hehehe...jillions of kisses headed your way

Sunshine...at least it put a song in  your head LOL...better than a commercial going round and round

Kethry sweet darlin friends we will be...and rejects? I dont think so...you deserve A's not B's...thanks

LOL 'deer...I believe in giving 100%...I just want to be sure you want what I do first...always takes two hearts in tune to make love work...thanks

Irish Rose...LOL yes but first they have to get close enough to kiss...thanks

Sandra...oh but sweet lady I have placed it...where better that Passions blue pages? Thanks

Wynter...they are great arent they...thank you

EagleOne...YOU!!! Struggle with words? Yeah right LOL...thank you


Wilfred Yeats
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since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704
Wilmington, Delaware
14 posted 2000-12-27 06:04 AM


kewl - I think I shall take it as a challenge and see what I come up with ~G~
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