Open Poetry #11 |
Personal Ad Application....HEY MARSHA |
Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Please answer yes or no to the following questions Do you like camping under starry skies Watching the sky light up with fireflies? Do you like an unexpected kiss When we're apart is it me you miss? Do you like picnics in the park After the sun sets and its just getting dark? Do you like cuddling in bed against the storm And watching the sunrise on a summers morn? Do you want a woman who is tender and true One who will spend her days loving you? If you answered with a resounding YES Then maybe I'm at the end of my quest So here's your chance to convince my heart And win a love that will never depart In twenty words or less lets see If you can convince this heart and me |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
Honest integrity Trustworthy, Loyal Loving heart Hopeless romantic Tender touch Holding hands Long kisses Burning passion Lifetime commitment hows that Richard |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Perfect Richard...I like all those qualities in a man... |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Paula love, looks like you're hired kid. Love this one as always. Utterly delicious. And after I spent all that time fixing him up too. Love it I really do Merry Christmas Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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rascalx Senior Member
since 1999-08-25
Posts 590Florence, SC, USA |
Paula, Where do I sign up, darling? Ok, twenty words or less: Butterfly flurry when we kiss Touching skin to skin, soul to soul Smile with our eyes, laugh with our hearts forever Ok, so that's 21 words ) Do I still pass? Beautifully written! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Love, joy, peace, long-suffering, kindness, goodness, faith, mildness, self-control and a resounding YES! The greatest of all these being LOVE! You tricky little deviless you! You're gonna land a big catch aren't ya! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sounds so like the Pina Colada song...and now I'll not have that tune out of my head all day... |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Paula. I like camping in the rain I like kissing though it brings me pain I like walking in the park watching sunsets, holding hands in dark I like summers and it's true I like autumn, winter's too But for you, could not offend I won't be your lover could I be your friend? together we could search the earth each find a mate, to to give us worth I don't know about me, YOU need no-one to stand up tall and face the sun Paula my dear don't sell yourself short twenty words is too few, you to court but if you find a man and I hope you do remember the rejects, can before me queue Great poem, and like Sunshine I will have that song going through my head all day. Kethry Religion is for people frightened about going to hell - Spirituality is for people who have been there. Anon. |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Hey, Paula, I can show a love that;s true But I must ask you...what about you? You want me to convince your heart But when are YOU supposed to start? I'll show you all that you will get Will MY requirement, too, be met? I see what you need to live But nothing that you're gonna give! So let's do this in harmony I'll tell you and you tell me And if, by chance, a meet occurs I'll show you mine - you show me yours! LOL! Just funning ya, Paula...you brought out that male chauvinist side of me that believes both sides have the responsibility of convincing the other...I HATE filling out applications! |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Paula, I always felt "it's in his kiss" throw away the application! "Love is a fire. But whether it is going to warm your hearth or burn down your house, you can never tell." Joan Crawford |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I'm singing "pina Colada" now too! Great ad Paula, I think you should place it, and find the one who understands all the questions. Sandra |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
this was great Paula..and I am enjoying the male responses especially *s ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Ya know ya had right up until I had to write something down, ya know how I struggle with words! Great work as always. "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Marsha...LOL well girlie yours was taking to long hehehe thanks sweetie Rascalx...of course you pass silly....with flying colours hehehe...thank you ethome...only one catch I want sweet poet man....glad you said yes hehehe...jillions of kisses headed your way Sunshine...at least it put a song in your head LOL...better than a commercial going round and round Kethry sweet darlin friends we will be...and rejects? I dont think so...you deserve A's not B's...thanks LOL 'deer...I believe in giving 100%...I just want to be sure you want what I do first...always takes two hearts in tune to make love work...thanks Irish Rose...LOL yes but first they have to get close enough to kiss...thanks Sandra...oh but sweet lady I have placed it...where better that Passions blue pages? Thanks Wynter...they are great arent they...thank you EagleOne...YOU!!! Struggle with words? Yeah right LOL...thank you |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
kewl - I think I shall take it as a challenge and see what I come up with ~G~ |
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