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when next I am touched.............................................
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when next I am touched............................................. |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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when next I am touched… I will recall you your smile that drawn out look of lingering in your eyes that spark that alighted briefly right…there… in your touch electric electric is not enough to express quivering not enough to elucidate anticipation at the exhilaration which remains right…here when I recall the lingering of your eyes when next I am touched you will hear my sigh Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Tony Abbot Member
since 2000-11-18
Posts 209North Wales,UK |
Gasp-inducingly beautiful.Full of longing of desire.Reminded me of Wagner's 'Tristan and Isolde'. 'Humankind cannot bear too much reality' T.S.Eliot |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
The longing and passion leap out of these beautiful words, through my eyes and into my heart. Now who is magic, my dear friend?  Follow your dream! |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Your warm rays of inspriration have touched my heart once angain. I liked the part about the lingering eyes... that mental image realy touched me. Bob <>< |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Lingering eyes and *sighs* thrown in as well...hhhmmmmmm now that has a message of visual images now doesn't it? Lovely verse my friend. |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Well, this got a big sigh out of me...  Beautiful yearning... Michael |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Tony, welcome to Passions! Thank you for coming in to read, and the audible "gasp" provided me a huge smile... Sunny1...thank you O shining one! Bob, having you visit is a treat, indeed...thank you... Mark, welcome home! Thanks for coming in to read... Ah Michael, how nice...thank you... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
*sigh* this is wonderful my friend. . . ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful, Karilea! Lovely! Denise |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I can hear the sigh now...actually I can hear the entire poem and it is beautiful... |
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DreamSeeker Member
since 2000-11-17
Posts 72 |
The Pounding Makes Mad Monkish Term Heart Strings Anvils Hammers Blind Believing Strokes Forges All We Crave And Call Unknown Forever Forged Anthem To... |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Whew...it's all been said, but this is a beauty. Sandra |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
thank you, friend Sven... denise, four words of thanks...all I ever need... 'Deer, whoever educated you...thank them for me...if you can hear, then you can...believe... DreamSeeker...I do not know why you pose your poetry so...but it is indeed intriguing... Welcome again, to Passions... Cat, I thank you...for I like it, too... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari I somehow missed this the first time round, so like Bo Peep, I've found the lost sheep, and have brought it home. And even if I hadn't missed it the first time round I would have done so. I missed you today kid, I really have, I know you've been busy so I'll soothe my soul with this. You know it's wonderful don't you, well it is as always and I love it too. Take care Majestic Marsha   Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
To borrow a word ... *sigh* Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Evening Sunshine, You do express yourself well in this writing of yours. Just lovely, and a pleasure when I read it. BC |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* yes, if only to be touched that I too may sigh like this. I love your work and the wonderful softness it gives me in the reading. Much love to you from me. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea--Everyone has sighed so much that I hope you don't mind one more...sigh and a beautiful! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah my friends, thank you...Marsha has learned that while beautiful lilies float on top [page 1] there are many treasures awaiting us below the water's surface...thank you Marsha for bringing this back up, 'tis one of my favorites... Interloper, from YOU, a sigh sounds good... Thank you Bill, for taking the time to read this... Startime...it's a soft touch...thank you... Martie...you can sigh, sing, laugh with me...anytime! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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kindasorta Member
since 2000-12-02
Posts 56 |
...sighing too! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
KindaSorta...Welcome to Passions! I am honored that you blessed my poem as your FIRST reply... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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dragonpoe Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608Palm Bay, Florida |
So very well done. A great effect in the brief lines and extra ...'s Enjoyed this very much. With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free.. dragonpoe |
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Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
Sigh, Sigh, Sigh...Nothing else come close except for maybe... another ~Sigh~... ~LL~ |
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Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
Oops...Sorry guys..  [This message has been edited by Lady Lightning (edited 12-07-2000).] |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
beautiful!!! What is that you express in your eyes? It seems to me more than all the words I have read in my life. Walt Whitman |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
dragonpoe, LadyLightening, Irish...thank you all for reading!... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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LilJenn New Member
since 2001-01-04
Posts 6Canada |
Now this is poetry... I have no chioce but to sigh I really enjoyed this |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
This leaves me aching, longing for the moment the love of my life next touches me. Splendid! |
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