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Seduction of Emptiness... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Seduction of Emptiness when morning light had just about broken and the kisses of your words would enter the dawning, my heart would light up in *softsmiles*... and thought kisses I would send in return. Never knowing if they were received, as they were meant to be. Now... I watch as others repeat the words I first expressed upon reading you each morning, and I smile again. Remembering... Wondering... What has happened to that specialness between us? Is it hidden deep in the shadows of darkness, awaiting temptation's exposure or have the images aged and become edge-frayed, worn from neglect, crumpled from despair, rendering them useless? Silence is heard loudly, kiss words are nil, filling my heart with the seduction of emptiness... once more. ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
Gee i can relate to your words. Very good writing. Very heart felt. Love and light, Richard |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I enjoyed this so much, so full of emotion. Oh, I wanted to tell you (from a previous thread) that Balladeer owns his own exterminator business, hence the "bug" references!! Merry Christmas  "Love is a fire. But whether it is going to warm your hearth or burn down your house, you can never tell." Joan Crawford |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Richard, thank you, everything I write is heartfelt and is probably how I am at the moment I write it..almost a diary of feelings for me huggzz and Merry Christmas ~Wynter Rose......thank you for that tidbit..I always wondered what all that was about..*s huggzz and a very Merry Eve to You too ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"Filling my heart with the seduction of emtiness." I feel this too...wish it didn't have to be like that...James |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh yes, the seduction of emptiness. What an awesome poem. So sad and so true. Merry Christmas, and hope you get some dream realized this new year. Sandra |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
this one reaches out and touches me. |
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rascalx Senior Member
since 1999-08-25
Posts 590Florence, SC, USA |
This touches me deeply, Wynter. Unfortunately, I know what an "empty" relationship feels like. Thank you for a powerful (if not bittersweet) reading experience.  ) |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
So very sad Wynter so very sad! A heart full of love...love for another with nowhere to go to find a release. Only to end up being filled with the seduction of emptiness .....very good writing for sure! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
James- me too, but some things we don't have control over no matter how we try huggzzz and hoping your holiday was nice Sandra- thank you, it's not the dreaming I ever worry about..just that darn reality gets in the way too often  RobertB- well the highest compliment to a poet, I think is that you touched someone, even if only one person... then my expressions were worth sharing ..thank you again Robert ~Wynter < !signature--> "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 12-26-2000).] |
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