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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2000-12-24 03:40 AM



Sweet Dreams, Sweetheart
~*Marge Tindal*~

Just as twilight comes
and the day begins it's end
Into my thoughts you come
the precious gift of a friend

The day may have been trying
Though Lord knows I've done my best
Realizing that you are there for me
puts my heart to rest

As these eyes close to envision
the slumbered dreams of the night
In my heart I'll hold you
until morning sees first light

Sweet dreams, sweetheart !


*Yes - you !




~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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© Copyright 2000 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
ethome
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1 posted 2000-12-24 03:58 AM


Aw thanks Marge sweet dreams to you too. Once again I wish you the best over the holidays. A very sweet poem!
JamesMichael
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2 posted 2000-12-24 05:47 AM


Nice and sweet Marge...Happy Holidays...James
EagleOne
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3 posted 2000-12-24 07:50 AM


Ya know you got me smiling again with your sweet words Marge!   Don't ya just love these little smileys    

"The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest"
~ My Angel.


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4 posted 2000-12-24 08:22 AM


In response: [and for heaven's sake...I've adopted another "role"]

Good morn, Sweetheart
come lean in, take part
in this kiss I have for you
sweet as this morning's dew

before the hectic takes us over
let us play in sweet sweet clover
before I lose my sight of you
let these memories take you through

then come again in the night
as God's blessed us to make it right
to end the day as we've begun
to again meld the two into one.

[Marge, with you inspiring me, I've nicknamed YOU 'Karilea's muse'...]


[This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 12-24-2000).]

Marsha
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5 posted 2000-12-24 08:33 AM


Margie girl, this is an absolutely delightful poem. Oh how right and true this is, love and friendship all around and that's just the way it should be. I love it I really do, what a wonderful idea to take to work with me.
Have a fabulous Christmas Eve, and thanks kid  
Take care
              Mushy
                


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



maxtec1
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6 posted 2000-12-24 11:04 AM


Wonderful dear friend. It gave me a warm feeling. Loved it,
Love and light,
Richard

Marge Tindal
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7 posted 2000-12-24 12:45 PM


ETHome~
May your slumber catch you in dreams.

James~
Happy Holidays to you too !

EagleOne~

Yes ... you !
A sweet smile was just what I wanted to know you were wearing  !

Karilea~
How Kari-a'musing !

Marsha~
Thanks, sweetie !
Have a wonderful day !

MaxTec~
Thanks.
Merry Christmas.
~*Marge*~




~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Irish Rose
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8 posted 2000-12-24 12:51 PM


I love your poetry, Marge, Merry Christmas!

"Love is a fire. But whether it is going to warm your hearth or burn down your house, you can never tell."
Joan Crawford

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9 posted 2000-12-24 05:21 PM


Aw, dear Margie, I KNOW this one's for me...and I wish Sunshine's was, too...well, one outta two ain't bad.

As always, Marge, you touch heartstrings in special ways.....Merry Christmas!

Mark Bohannan
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10 posted 2000-12-25 06:48 PM


So YOU ARE dreaming of cowboys then.  I thought you might be.  

A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses.
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BillyBull
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11 posted 2000-12-25 08:17 PM


Hi Sis,
Just thought I'd let you know that I'm on
here reading your poems.

                Big Bro

EagleScorpion
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12 posted 2000-12-25 08:33 PM


I've been on and off these forums for most of this past year; mostly skimming and reading without really saying anything, but I must post a reply for this poem.. only because I would bet my life that this poem rings true down to the very last word, with no lies or attempts to flaunt one's self... just an innocent display of a content and happy life. God bless you, Marge Tindal

Will you come travel with me? Shall we stick by each other as long as we live?

Kethry
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13 posted 2000-12-26 11:03 AM


Marge,
I sooo needed to read this one. Thank you.
Keth


Religion is for people frightened about going to hell - Spirituality is for people who have been there. Anon.


Marge Tindal
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14 posted 2000-12-26 10:35 PM


Kathleen~
Thank you soooooooo much.

Balladeer~
I'd say you're batting 1000 !

MarkB~
ALWAYS !

BillyBull~
My sweet big brother, it was so good to see
you today and I love YOU !

EagleScorpion~
That is a VERY nice thing to say.
I thank you from the bottom of my little heart.

Kethry~
And, I needed to write it
for someone special.
So glad to share it with all.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Lone Wolf
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15 posted 2000-12-26 10:37 PM


Marge~

This was beautiful my friend.  Lovely thoughts from a wonderful lady.  I hope your holidays were merry.  

LW


Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats

Startime
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16 posted 2000-12-26 10:40 PM


*sigh* a beautiful message to someone you love. May both of you find the pure happiness of true love. Much love to you from me.

Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com


Mike
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17 posted 2000-12-26 10:46 PM


definately a keeper, this one.

kcsgrandma
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18 posted 2000-12-26 10:58 PM


This is a beauty, Marge.  How sweet and tender!

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

Denise
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19 posted 2000-12-27 09:33 AM


Sweet Sweet Dreams, Marge!! Very pretty!!

Denise

Marge Tindal
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20 posted 2000-12-30 11:32 AM


LoneWolf~
My days were and are very merry, my friend.
*Hugs* to you.

StarTime~
Thank you.
Happiness is for sharing.

Mike~
And so are you, my friend.

KCS~
Thank you so much.

Denise~
You know I appreciate you, dear friend.
~*Marge*~



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21 posted 2001-01-06 06:44 PM


HI Maiden........this one's a keeper and is posted on my heart.......aroha
Marge Tindal
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22 posted 2001-01-06 09:49 PM


SoaringEagle~
And thus it is so ...
for in my heart I keep all memories of you.
Sung on the songs of the night~
*Hugs* ...
~*MaidenYours*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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