Open Poetry #11 |
Sweet Dreams, Sweetheart |
Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sweet Dreams, Sweetheart ~*Marge Tindal*~ Just as twilight comes and the day begins it's end Into my thoughts you come the precious gift of a friend The day may have been trying Though Lord knows I've done my best Realizing that you are there for me puts my heart to rest As these eyes close to envision the slumbered dreams of the night In my heart I'll hold you until morning sees first light Sweet dreams, sweetheart ! *Yes - you ! ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Aw thanks Marge sweet dreams to you too. Once again I wish you the best over the holidays. A very sweet poem! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice and sweet Marge...Happy Holidays...James |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Ya know you got me smiling again with your sweet words Marge! Don't ya just love these little smileys "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
In response: [and for heaven's sake...I've adopted another "role"] Good morn, Sweetheart come lean in, take part in this kiss I have for you sweet as this morning's dew before the hectic takes us over let us play in sweet sweet clover before I lose my sight of you let these memories take you through then come again in the night as God's blessed us to make it right to end the day as we've begun to again meld the two into one. [Marge, with you inspiring me, I've nicknamed YOU 'Karilea's muse'...] [This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 12-24-2000).] |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Margie girl, this is an absolutely delightful poem. Oh how right and true this is, love and friendship all around and that's just the way it should be. I love it I really do, what a wonderful idea to take to work with me. Have a fabulous Christmas Eve, and thanks kid Take care Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
Wonderful dear friend. It gave me a warm feeling. Loved it, Love and light, Richard |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ETHome~ May your slumber catch you in dreams. James~ Happy Holidays to you too ! EagleOne~ Yes ... you ! A sweet smile was just what I wanted to know you were wearing ! Karilea~ How Kari-a'musing ! Marsha~ Thanks, sweetie ! Have a wonderful day ! MaxTec~ Thanks. Merry Christmas. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I love your poetry, Marge, Merry Christmas! "Love is a fire. But whether it is going to warm your hearth or burn down your house, you can never tell." Joan Crawford |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Aw, dear Margie, I KNOW this one's for me...and I wish Sunshine's was, too...well, one outta two ain't bad. As always, Marge, you touch heartstrings in special ways.....Merry Christmas! |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
So YOU ARE dreaming of cowboys then. I thought you might be. A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses. author unknown |
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BillyBull Junior Member
since 2000-09-19
Posts 15DeLand,Fl. USA |
Hi Sis, Just thought I'd let you know that I'm on here reading your poems. Big Bro |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
I've been on and off these forums for most of this past year; mostly skimming and reading without really saying anything, but I must post a reply for this poem.. only because I would bet my life that this poem rings true down to the very last word, with no lies or attempts to flaunt one's self... just an innocent display of a content and happy life. God bless you, Marge Tindal Will you come travel with me? Shall we stick by each other as long as we live? |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Marge, I sooo needed to read this one. Thank you. Keth Religion is for people frightened about going to hell - Spirituality is for people who have been there. Anon. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kathleen~ Thank you soooooooo much. Balladeer~ I'd say you're batting 1000 ! MarkB~ ALWAYS ! BillyBull~ My sweet big brother, it was so good to see you today and I love YOU ! EagleScorpion~ That is a VERY nice thing to say. I thank you from the bottom of my little heart. Kethry~ And, I needed to write it for someone special. So glad to share it with all. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Marge~ This was beautiful my friend. Lovely thoughts from a wonderful lady. I hope your holidays were merry. LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* a beautiful message to someone you love. May both of you find the pure happiness of true love. Much love to you from me. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
definately a keeper, this one. |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
This is a beauty, Marge. How sweet and tender! To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Sweet Sweet Dreams, Marge!! Very pretty!! Denise |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LoneWolf~ My days were and are very merry, my friend. *Hugs* to you. StarTime~ Thank you. Happiness is for sharing. Mike~ And so are you, my friend. KCS~ Thank you so much. Denise~ You know I appreciate you, dear friend. ~*Marge*~ |
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Soaringeagle Member
since 2000-12-06
Posts 156CANADA |
HI Maiden........this one's a keeper and is posted on my heart.......aroha |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SoaringEagle~ And thus it is so ... for in my heart I keep all memories of you. Sung on the songs of the night~ *Hugs* ... ~*MaidenYours*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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