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lingering...(of love's regret....)
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lingering...(of love's regret....) |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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A simple drive I pass the house and see a tomb of family each planting Every willow tree— each shadow that might whisper "me", ghostly girl, She’s beckoning— Jumping rope within her hand… No one is home. I am alone. My simple door is locked. I glance upon my naked wrist accursed of no clock… Oh my fingers of duress against the winter’s pane, I press, and cry in smell of famine’s feast, one more bone? I taunt, the beast…. Granted, you? and all, you do-- I duck, I dance, I pirouhette-- Slanted, NEW With all? I DO. I duck, I dance, in silhouette… Every shadow, mimics me--- in love with you, the tide of sea... Each shell? She washes back to me-- a lingering, of love's regret. Prints of foot upon the sand Easy word to understand and everything I was before? Leads me here, To one child’s door— Every breath breathed unto you? Every, each, un-colored, hue... I could not be here as before— Love you, Love you, Love you….more… [This message has been edited by serenity (edited 12-24-2000).] |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Well done Celeste! Wonderful writing of soul filled reflections! Have a nice holiday...ethome |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Every shadow, mimics me--- in love with you, the tide of sea... Each shell? She washes back to me-- a lingering, of love's regret. Prints of foot upon the sand Easy word to understand and everything I was before? Leads me here, To one child’s door— Every breath breathed unto you? Every, each, un-colored, hue... I could not be here as before— Love you, Love you, Love you….more… ================= OHHOWILOVEWHENYOUWRITELIKETHIS  me twin...I swear I can eat your rhyme with a golden spoon... I love when you do your repetative lines and wrap them in your smooth as butter rhymes. this is enchanting sen...and beautiful and now its in my treasure chest of you. love ya me lovely poet of the south me Some people find subtlety in strangers if you find anything~let me in Your eyes~you see everything my eyes~I see it all together now~and I know |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Doing the birthday bump from me library of rhyme divine Sen keepers. Its your day..the forums shall be your marquee  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I'm so pleased JM broutght this back up... I wasn't a member then...and ..well... I sure did miss a lot... Lady you sure can write!!!!!!! |
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