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Take a Letter Maria
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Take a Letter Maria |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Take a Letter Maria Hi hon, how are you. I'm not doing so hot. I've spent some time thinking about you and I miss you alot. I miss the lovely smile on your beautiful face and I miss the comfort found within your warm embrace. I miss looking at you and admiring you in all your natural beauty. I miss your voice. Soft, sweet and soothing. Sure miss those romantic evenings we spent together feeling your breasts poking me in the chest. And your kiss, that too I miss. But don't worry about me because I'm alright. I'm your friend and I'll never pretend to be anything more than what we are. Our friendship will take us where we desire to go. It will move mountains for us and refresh our weary souls. We'll build on a solid foundation, a rock. This is very important to me. I'll never let our friendship just wash away like grains of sand washed into the sea. Believe in me because I am.... Your friend, James Jameslee@December20,2000 |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
it's that poke in the chest that makes the letter loud and clear....whooohhhhhh I must be feeling the Christmas spirit, I sure did enjoy this!!!!!! "If you live to be a hundred, I want to live to be a hundred minus one day, so I never have to live without you." Winnie the Pooh |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
James this has quite a turn-a-round within the bounds of the verse. I like the positive aspect...the deriving of something good at least from the pain of separation....but the old fire is there and you've written that in there very well..I enjoyed!! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Our friendship will take us where we desire to go. It will move mountains for us and refresh our weary souls. We'll build on a solid foundation, a rock. This is very important to me. I'll never let our friendship just wash away like grains of sand washed into the sea. Believe in me because I am.... special...very special words, James  ~WYnter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
very touching and hopeful! Keep the faith! Mele Kalikimaka! Passion,imagination and intellect running together... Poetry in motion~~~ Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
thanx for the soulbaring piece...i do think its nice of you to be content to remain a friend when you may still be hurting... hugs |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
James...is good to know that friendship comes first...and that you have the courage and the heart to take it father when the time is right...being a friend first is so important...Merry Christmas sweetie |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I thank you all for the lovely comments...Paula I am working on the friendship thing...not as easy as I thought...still takes two willing participants...one may want to be casual and the other desire a little more... I have a new friend that honestly seems to appreciate me more than any woman I have been close to...we'll see what happens...James |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Like this...James |
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