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Open Poetry #11

Just for A Night

windwarrior
New Member

since 2000-12-22

Posts 7
California

0 posted 2000-12-24 03:03 AM

Just for a night
I wish to have
no sense of taste
to know
with the sense
of hearing
the flavors of you.

Just for a night
I wish to have
no sense of hearing
to know
with the sense
of smell
the wonderful
words you say.

Just for a night
I wish to have
no sense of smell
to know
with the sense
of sight
the scents of you.

Just for a night
I wish to have
no sense of sight
to know
with the sense
of taste
how beautiful
you are.

Just for my nights
I wish to have
the sense of touch
to show
how much
I want
to touch you
again
tomorrow night.

Just for your nights
I wish to have
all my senses
to tell you
how much
I love you.

live like there's no tomorrow,
RJ

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

1 posted 2000-12-24 04:03 AM

Very nice work! From the yearning heart of a poet for sure!

KokoStewartKoomoa
Senior Member

since 2000-12-04

Posts 580
Waikiki, Hawaii

2 posted 2000-12-24 06:15 AM

RJ, This is quite spectacular! WOW what a play on words and ideas. Amazing! This poem is so romantic.

Merry Christmas

Passion,imagination
and intellect
running together...
Poetry in motion~~~

Aloha with
warmest regards, Koko

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2000-12-24 08:30 AM

Quite sensitive...{~,^}...good job!

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