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Wish Senryu #2!
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Wish Senryu #2! |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
I wish I could dance Slip inside the gentle notes Live them once again To capture and live a moment is truly living |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Very soft and delicate...a beautiful wish indeed!!! You cannot dance in the sun until you have cried in the rain~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
O, such a dance...a dream...wonderful... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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DreamSeeker Member
since 2000-11-17
Posts 72 |
Dance On A MoonBeam Starlight Your Silver Setting Feel Heavens Embrace |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
Thanks so much - Butterflies_don't_cry and Sunshine! DreamSeeker - you're quite the senryu writer! To capture and live a moment is truly living |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
 Oh, how we live and dance within those gentle notes of song. I enjoyed your Senryu and it did bring a little more life to my spirit. Bob <>< |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Notes of yesterday dancing in my heart and soul memories cherished |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
thse jap forms are really fun to do, arent they? such a soothing read...will be looking forward to more from you  |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
What a beautiful sentiment Dreamkeeper ... to "slip inside the gentle notes" ... such perfect expression, nicely done! Best wishes, /Kit |
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