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Passions Gallery--kaile (eastern star, western light)
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Passions Gallery--kaile (eastern star, western light) |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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eastern western star light shine sparkle this this day night tell share your your story heart to with us our here lives we’ll we listen know [This message has been edited by Sven (edited 11-16-2000).] |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Interesting way of writing.  I like it ! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
That's very creative Sven! clever idea..and I really like how the words tie in.... very good!! ethome |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
it's takes the right kind of poem and a person with patience to be able to do concrete poetry and do it well! I'm impressed! |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Awwww....thank you Sven for this sweet gesture (my eyes nearly popped right out when i saw this dedication)No,no, the honour is mine...i have delightful times getting to know all of you here and anticipate more such great moments... thanx for your willingness to listen to me though |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Sven~ Very impressive piece both in structure and content...well done and well penned for one such as Kaile ~HUG~ Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Kaile must be a star in the heavens to have provoked such an interesting tribute... well done to both the muse, and the mused... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Temptress, thank you!! ethome, thank you. . . that's just what I wanted. . . Snow, thank you. . . glad that I could make an impression. . . this did take a little patience. . . but the end result made it all worth while. . . tracie, thank you. . . this was fun to do. . . just have to remember to count the spaces next time!  Sunshine, he brings together a lot of things in his writing. . . and I tried to show that here. . .thank you my friend. . . Kaile, thank you for letting us hear you. . . it's been an honor to read your work and to have you here. . . and to call you friend. . . I look forward to reading more of your work. . .thank you again. . . ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sir Sven, you did this amazingly well. I loved it. A loving tribute. write on Kethry Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed? Rex E. Alford |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Sven, Well done my friend. Beautiful format . . . just like the yin and the yang. LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
it has been a pleasure to read your work too, Sven and thank you so much for the compliment about "bringing together many things in his writing"..much appreciated |
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