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wayoutwalt
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0 posted 2000-12-23 02:32 AM



Lovers walking away
A ten pace and they will shoot
But I never learned to count that high
And I think you're just so cute

See my bullets are full of love
And your bullets are full of heart
If we shot each other right now
I think we'd be really smart

Lovers barefoot and walking
On the sands of dusty beaches
I sing of broken bottles
And the lesson that it teaches

Young passionate lover hear me
If she can stop the flow of bleeding
You should grab her up right now
And say a wife you are needing

If she’s pretty, pass out real far
Watching the sun finally set
For take heart she must know CPR
And to first base you will get

Lovers with hands in hands
Gazing at the cliff’s wide view
Sweaty palms, one of us slip
I guess it better be you

Love, I know it ain’t no joke
For some reason I say “MEEP MEEP”
O'er the cliff into a pile of smoke
Your sign reads “Love ain’t cheap!”




[This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 12-23-2000).]

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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2000-12-23 04:06 AM


Walt~
Well, if I have to go to bed before I can get up -
I might just as well go smiling !  

LOL @ you.
Waiting for Santa are you ?
Well, put the bullets away ...
we told him you'd been a goooooood boy !

Night-night
Sleep tight
Don't bite any bedbugs !

"MEEP MEEP" Christmas, Walt !
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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wayoutwalt
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2 posted 2000-12-23 09:56 AM


thanky
Marge yuh i do the best roadrunner impression heheheh

Startime
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3 posted 2000-12-23 10:24 AM


Yes, indeed, this puts a smile on the face. A great way to start the day. Much love and Christmas hugs to you from me.

Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com


doreen peri
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4 posted 2000-12-23 02:19 PM


"Lovers with hands in hands
Gazing at the cliff’s wide view
Sweaty palms, one of us slip
I guess it better be you"

ROFL!!! you sure can write a love poem, WayOW

hehe.... meep meep.... whooooooosh!

wayoutwalt
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5 posted 2000-12-23 07:13 PM


doreen and star big warm smiles to ya'll

Merry Christmas

Poeminister
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6 posted 2000-12-23 10:15 PM


Walt--Enjoyed this  




Poeminister

Alicat
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7 posted 2000-12-23 10:32 PM


WoWsers, Walt-dude! Dis one is a coolie one, yuh yuh!  


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“It is not the strongest of the species that survive, nor the most
intelligent, but the one most responsive to change.” Charles Darwin

wayoutwalt
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TEXAS (it's all big)
8 posted 2000-12-23 11:00 PM


Poe and dear Ali Meep Meep!
ethome
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9 posted 2000-12-23 11:43 PM


Hey Walt you should be working for Warner Bros. they could use some new material the old stuff's stale....MEEP MEEP! here comes Walt! no not Walt Disney....wayoutwalt!.... I guess they no nothing...not like us here..heh heh....yuh!
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