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Poet deVine
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0 posted 2000-12-22 11:16 PM




With softening looks
Her eyes meet mine
A glance is all
We need
And thus a love
Rare and divine
Is born from just
This seed
How can I explain
What she means to me
How my heart
Feels blessed
At least for now
It’s puppy love
As the house remains
Un-messed.

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ethome
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1 posted 2000-12-22 11:24 PM


I love the way you end this one with a metaphor linked to reality...excellent writing I enjoyed this very much...have a nice holiday....ethome
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2 posted 2000-12-22 11:25 PM


A Christmas puppy? too sweet!!! We had one of those one year, she ate the presents, ate the tree, the coffee table, and well, you get the idea...grin.

Hope you're having a lovely holiday Sharon.
We all miss you very much. HUGS. And Merry Christmas.

Lighthousebob
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3 posted 2000-12-22 11:26 PM


Ha..... Those puppies can certainly make a big mess once they grow up.   Enjoyable.  Bob <><
maxtec1
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4 posted 2000-12-22 11:27 PM


Cute poem, i liked it. Good writting.
Love and light,
Richard

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5 posted 2000-12-22 11:28 PM


PdV...so what's the name? < !signature-->

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ





[This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 12-22-2000).]

serenity blaze
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6 posted 2000-12-23 09:51 AM


Just wanted to add---isn't puppy breath just THE BEST?
wayoutwalt
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7 posted 2000-12-23 09:53 AM


this is so witty grrrr love it yuh
Poet deVine
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8 posted 2000-12-23 10:11 AM


Actually, the she is a he...a Shar Pei mix.. his name is Barkley..and unfortunately he's living up to his name!! But he's a cutie! He NEEDS to be hugged a lot!  
Sunshine
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9 posted 2000-12-23 02:09 PM


Well then pass Barkley over here...after he plays for awhile with Abby, he can get lots of good hugs from me...I'm a great hugger...

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




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10 posted 2000-12-23 04:29 PM


ahhhh Paul Anka, "and they called it Puppy Love......oh I guess they'll never know....
how a young heart really feels...and why I love her so.  And they called it Puppy Love..just because they're seventeen.  Tell them all, please tell them it isn't fair, to take away my only dream.."

sorry I got carried away!!!!!!!

"If you live to be a hundred, I want to live to be a hundred minus one day,
so I never have to live without you."

Winnie the Pooh



Kit McCallum
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11 posted 2000-12-23 04:35 PM


Awwww Sharon ... this just gave me the most wondeful warm and fuzzy feeling all over! Barkley's a lucky little fella ... many, many puppy hugs to you!  

Happy Holidays and Best wishes,
/Kit

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12 posted 2000-12-23 06:37 PM


AHH! PUPPIES!!!!!



(I guess you can see I'm an animal lover!)

jwesley
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13 posted 2000-12-23 06:40 PM


AHH! PUPPIES!!!!!



Especially when they leave the house unmessed!  You said it perfectly, my friend.


(Sorry love bug...just had to copy that!)

jwesley

jwesley
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14 posted 2000-12-23 06:41 PM


oops...doubled the post..sorry

[This message has been edited by jwesley (edited 12-23-2000).]

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15 posted 2000-12-23 06:44 PM


Devine One....I always knew you would wind up with a sharpy!! CONGRATS!!!!  
Poet deVine
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16 posted 2000-12-23 09:44 PM


Balladeer, I had to get a dog, my pet store was fresh out of 'deer!!!!
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