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Puppy Love
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Puppy Love |
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Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
With softening looks Her eyes meet mine A glance is all We need And thus a love Rare and divine Is born from just This seed How can I explain What she means to me How my heart Feels blessed At least for now It’s puppy love As the house remains Un-messed. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I love the way you end this one with a metaphor linked to reality...excellent writing I enjoyed this very much...have a nice holiday....ethome |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
A Christmas puppy? too sweet!!! We had one of those one year, she ate the presents, ate the tree, the coffee table, and well, you get the idea...grin. Hope you're having a lovely holiday Sharon. We all miss you very much. HUGS. And Merry Christmas. |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
 Ha..... Those puppies can certainly make a big mess once they grow up. Enjoyable. Bob <>< |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
Cute poem, i liked it. Good writting. Love and light, Richard |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
PdV...so what's the name? < !signature--> Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ [This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 12-22-2000).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Just wanted to add---isn't puppy breath just THE BEST? |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
this is so witty grrrr love it yuh |
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Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Actually, the she is a he...a Shar Pei mix.. his name is Barkley..and unfortunately he's living up to his name!! But he's a cutie! He NEEDS to be hugged a lot!  |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Well then pass Barkley over here...after he plays for awhile with Abby, he can get lots of good hugs from me...I'm a great hugger... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
ahhhh Paul Anka, "and they called it Puppy Love......oh I guess they'll never know.... how a young heart really feels...and why I love her so. And they called it Puppy Love..just because they're seventeen. Tell them all, please tell them it isn't fair, to take away my only dream.." sorry I got carried away!!!!!!! "If you live to be a hundred, I want to live to be a hundred minus one day, so I never have to live without you." Winnie the Pooh |
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Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Awwww Sharon ... this just gave me the most wondeful warm and fuzzy feeling all over! Barkley's a lucky little fella ... many, many puppy hugs to you!  Happy Holidays and Best wishes, /Kit |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
AHH! PUPPIES!!!!!(I guess you can see I'm an animal lover!) |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
AHH! PUPPIES!!!!!Especially when they leave the house unmessed! You said it perfectly, my friend. (Sorry love bug...just had to copy that!) jwesley |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
oops...doubled the post..sorry [This message has been edited by jwesley (edited 12-23-2000).] |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Devine One....I always knew you would wind up with a sharpy!! CONGRATS!!!!  |
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Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Balladeer, I had to get a dog, my pet store was fresh out of 'deer!!!! |
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