Open Poetry #11 |
Vanishing Act |
Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Vanishing Act As though we’d never been, painted over my picture with broad and sure strokes, history rewritten, words reduced to mere letters, manipulated dots on a page erased and replaced by hers. © 2000 Corinne Bailey |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is very sad, Corinne. Very well written! Denise |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Sad, true, but VERY well done. jwesley |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thanks, Denise and JWesley! Corinne |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Corinne, too true on this one. Nice write. Park |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Too true...well done... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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