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Heartquake |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain 
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Heartquake dividing horizons of showering moonstones encased in a shimmering beam splitting tremors that have the temerity of a raging tempest quivering ripples of a ravenous desire chisel through icy formations rapturous infernos stoke the unknown with ravishing tendrils Against the dewy blanket, beneath the heated sighs, a tremble and a shiver within arched anticipation< !signature--> "...I am a river in winter, quiet in the eyes of most but deep, swift and full of life to one, lucky enough to fall through the ice." snow [This message has been edited by Snow (edited 12-22-2000).] |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
This has all the qualities of a passion waiting to explode. Also love your signature. |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
inot2B....thank you so much for your reply on the poem. the signature is from another piece i wrote.. thank you *smiling* Snow< !signature--> "...I am a river in winter, quiet in the eyes of most but deep, swift and full of life to one, lucky enough to fall through the ice." snow [This message has been edited by Snow (edited 12-22-2000).] |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
I have felt this quake before and you have penned it well. I felt the every tremor of it as I read it. Wonderful write. A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses. author unknown |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Snow~ This is wonderful and sensuous and inviting. Very well done and full of metaphorical delight. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Your imagery and metaphor are right on...this one should be read again.... "Love is a fire. But whether it is going to warm your hearth or burn down your house, you can never tell." Joan Crawford |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
I'm sorry its taken so long for me to say thank you, but please know I appreciate your taking the time to comment thank you, snow |
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