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Snow
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desert flower looking for rain

0 posted 2000-12-20 11:39 PM



Unravel My Heart

300 stitches from right to left
three hundred times I let
my heart beat out the words
I love you, through my fingers

300 times I whispered my
promises of commitment
three hundred twists
knotting out our future
... reaching
out to you, pulling the
yarn tighter around us

300 stitches from right to left
32 skeins of colors blending  
row upon row of 300 dreams

right to left.. fingers moving
along the memory of you
of .. us
...three hundred times
I've let a tear fall, upon
300 unfinished dreams
as they now unravel
from left to right



"...I am a river in winter,
quiet in the eyes of most
but deep,
swift and full of life
to one, lucky enough to fall through the ice.

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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2000-12-20 11:50 PM


so many images...cross-stitch, knitting, quilling, days, weeks, months, ... so many images, so much heartbreak...

well done Snow...


Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




Snow
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2 posted 2000-12-28 04:42 PM


thank you for taking the time to read and comment ;-)

snow

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