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So Wrong... |
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Words_of_Glitter Member
since 2000-10-25
Posts 90USA |
Is it so wrong for me to want your needs to be met? To try and help you reach the goals you've set To love you even though you can't love me back Want you to reciprocate the feelings that you lack Is it so wrong of me to want to take away your pain? To make your life so less mundane To make you laugh instead of cry To never want to say good-bye Is it so wrong of me to want to fall in love with you? Even though it's more pain than anyone should ever go through Is it so wrong of me to block out a truth I can't help but see? I hope one day you'll realize that it was so wrong of you not to fall in love with me. "Do not marry the one that you can live with. Marry the one you cannot live without." |
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Bilal Member
since 2000-12-13
Posts 66 |
Beautiful and loving. Not to forget rhyming as well. Loved to read it. Bilal |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
The poem was sweet and sad. Don't stop living your own life. Find someone who will love you and let the world know that you are the one for them. |
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Hill's_Chatabox Junior Member
since 2001-07-10
Posts 46USA |
Oh Sarah, you hit me with a brick and knocked me out.. I so agree with what you are saying here.. i can also totally agree with you. more than words can say. good job, Loved it loved it........... |
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Hill's_Chatabox Junior Member
since 2001-07-10
Posts 46USA |
I meant to say I can also relate to what you are saying here in this poem, Duh I am a DITTS... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 this is sad to me |
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