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Snow's Lovers
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Snow's Lovers |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion 
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Snow’s Lovers Settle of snow, once soft with promise stiffens into glacial indifference, peaks coated in frosted layers as suitors come and go, rare blue moon covets & casts a spell of unearthly glow, tall ancient spires long for silvery sheaths of hoarfrost but spring, spring is the lover that melts. © 2000 Corinne Bailey |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
This was exquisite for my eyes.  Nice to see you! |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thank you, Temptress, nice to see you, too! Corinne |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Vivid!!! And I love the final statement... "spring is the lover that melts." ;o} |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Hello fellow Snow Bunny I just got donesending "snow photos" to all my southern friends with wishes of sunburns to them...LOL Love your weave...it is a beautiful sight isn't it...I truly do love the snow and the beautiful picture it paints outside to bad I couldn't have 70 degree weather and snow...  You cannot dance in the sun until you have cried in the rain~ |
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dragonpoe Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608Palm Bay, Florida |
Beautifully done. I miss winter. I've been in Florida for 3 1/2 yrs now and I am really missing the seasons this year. I enjoyed this one. Great imagery, let me feel like I was there, enjoying the snow. With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free.. dragonpoe |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Yes, it's beautiful unless you are knee-deep in it! There are so many endless images to be written about with snow, and Corinne, this did you proud! "Always be a first rate version of your self instead of a second rate version of someone else." Marilyn Monroe |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
So then you must be spring.... I can see it in those Irish eye's. Park |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thank you, Voss, Butterflies, dragonpoe, Irish Rose and Parker! Corinne |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* such beautiful images. Thank you so much. Much love to you from me. I love hoarfrost. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thanks, Startime! Corinne |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wonderful! |
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