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Victoria
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0 posted 2000-12-20 12:58 PM


Do you wish everyday was filled with holly?
a ride upon a sweet tea trolley
for some no need for mistletoe by golly
snowflakes, decorate, gifts of Christmas
wrapping gently white ribbons and bows
rejoice in the meaning..flourish the greening
rejuvenate with love for those
each day.. presents not under the tree
a gift of love you give to others
love does not arrive upon a red sleigh..
does not arrive just on Christmas day
love is lit within the candle of your heart

love and light.. not just Christmas night
let love and peace..your heart reunite

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A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)  






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Mark Bohannan
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1 posted 2000-12-20 01:02 PM


And all tied together beautifully in a ribbon of your words.  Loved the read my friend.

A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses.
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inot2B
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2 posted 2000-12-20 01:58 PM


You said it so nicely. Love in your heart everyday of the year.
Victoria
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3 posted 2000-12-20 03:30 PM


Mark..thank you so much..nice to hear from you today

inot2b..i am pleased you enjoyed..thank you for peeking in

                     ~Victoria~

A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)



JamesMichael
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4 posted 2000-12-20 05:17 PM


And if there is not love all thru the year somehow it just doesn't fit in at Christmastime...James
Victoria
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5 posted 2000-12-20 08:10 PM


Thank you so much james..you are so right..and have a safe trip to the mainland

                 ~Victoria~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)



Lighthousebob
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6 posted 2000-12-20 09:08 PM


So true, Love is the greatest gift and can be opened all year long.... don't even require festive packaging.  Bob <><
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7 posted 2000-12-20 09:13 PM


Victoria, this is absolutely beautiful, and so true!!  

Denise

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8 posted 2000-12-20 09:14 PM


~Victoria~ A poem that needs to be published everywhere...a beautiful gift you have given to all that read this...


Greeneyes~

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9 posted 2000-12-20 09:21 PM


What a wonderful world it would be if the peace and love shared at Christmas time would last all year long.   A beautiful poem Victoria.

If a dream touches us, it exists to us as anything else that touches us.
John


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10 posted 2000-12-20 10:34 PM


thank you bob..happy to hear from you

Denise..Hugs to you..thanks for popping in tonight

Greeneyes..thank you so much..pleased you enjoyed..

John..Peace and love in the heart is a blessing thank you for taking time to read john

               ~Victoria~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)



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