Open Poetry #11 |
Stnupfly Sonnet (#8ish) |
Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I'm reeeally sick! I hab an awfoo code - I don' feel good doe madder what I do. I deed tsum soup and a stupfed bear to hode. Oh doe.. Here cubs a great bid sneedze... ah-CHOO! I'm reeeally sick! I'm stnupfly and I'm blue I deed a great bid box ob titsues, pleadze - Here cubs another, AH-ah-AH-ah-CHOO!! I'b sorry folks, I din'nt mean to sneedze. But I can'd breedthe - I cough an' then I wheedze. Rebembering what mommy always said, "Stay cubbered and drindk tea so you don' freedze." If you'd escuze me pleadze, I'm goind back to bed. Who-ebber gabe dis awfoo code to me. Pleadze take it back - Now where idz my blankey??? [This message has been edited by Nan (edited 12-18-2000).] |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Bless you ... bless you ... bless you ... hope you're better soon ... and hey ... you actually spelled all kinds of words wrong ... at least I think they were words ~ This was great Nan |
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John R Member
since 2000-12-14
Posts 141Toledo OH |
This is too cute Nan < !signature--> If a dream touches us, it exists to us as anything else that touches us. John [This message has been edited by Nan (edited 12-19-2000).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Another cute poem, Nan! I'm getting quite a collection of cute things for my kids...dey gonna lub dis!!! sniff!!! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Mama's bringing the chicken soup.... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
One of my all-time Nan favs!!! er, is that a chest cold? |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
a wool sock - vicks vaporrub and chicken soup - advil cold and sinus - and hot buttered rum - and more tissues - - I've got you covered |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Thanks everybody... One third of my class is out sick.. The other two thirds are like hovercraft... sneezing in my face and asking to go to the nurse... I'm OK in the morning - by evening, I can feel this silly bug grabbing me, though... Thanks for all the drugs & stuff... Deer... It's really all in the head.. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Ebbing Nancy, Ah, Ah, Ah, schnickelfritzen!! Tanks Nan, now I's gouth de codl too! BCI |
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Bilal Member
since 2000-12-13
Posts 66 |
This is the first time I am reading your peotry and it's hilarious. LOL. I loved it. its so funny and reminds me to stay 'cubbered' as my mom would ask me to. Bilal |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Ah, Nan... the title reached out and pulled me in... and the description of your miseries left this gal with the giggles. *G* This is delightful! |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Now this one is one cute little piece and I am sure that with all those little runny noses, you are finding yourself with a classfull of these butchered syllables. Wonderful write from you. Have a beautiful and a "GERM FREE" Holiday as you definitely deserve it in so many ways. A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses. author unknown |
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shinamoon Junior Member
since 2000-12-07
Posts 15Daytona Beach, usa |
Nan, I promise not to cough or sneeze if you promise not to breath in my direction!!! great poem!!!! |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is too cute, Nan, and describes my condition perfectly this past week. Glad it's almost over with. Denise |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Nan~ Hey, this poem is nothing to sneeze at ! Can't see the screen for laughing - That IS laughter - isn't it ? OH NO ! Did you hafta sneeze on the monitor ? Geeeesh ! Just tooooooo cute, Nan~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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