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Nan
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0 posted 2000-12-18 09:41 PM




I'm reeeally sick! I hab an awfoo code -
I don' feel good doe madder what I do.
I deed tsum soup and a stupfed bear to hode.
Oh doe.. Here cubs a great bid sneedze... ah-CHOO!

I'm reeeally sick! I'm stnupfly and I'm blue
I deed a great bid box ob titsues, pleadze -
Here cubs another, AH-ah-AH-ah-CHOO!!
I'b sorry folks, I din'nt mean to sneedze.

But I can'd breedthe - I cough an' then I wheedze.
Rebembering what mommy always said,
"Stay cubbered and drindk tea so you don' freedze."
If you'd escuze me pleadze, I'm goind back to bed.

Who-ebber gabe dis awfoo code to me.
Pleadze take it back - Now where idz my blankey???








[This message has been edited by Nan (edited 12-18-2000).]
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Rex Allen McCoy
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1 posted 2000-12-18 09:47 PM


Bless you ... bless you ... bless you ...
hope you're better soon ... and hey ... you actually spelled all kinds of words wrong ... at least I think they were words
~
This was great Nan

John R
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2 posted 2000-12-18 10:06 PM


This is too cute Nan

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[This message has been edited by Nan (edited 12-19-2000).]

serenity blaze
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3 posted 2000-12-18 10:41 PM


Another cute poem, Nan! I'm getting quite a collection of cute things for my kids...dey gonna lub dis!!! sniff!!!
Sunshine
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4 posted 2000-12-18 10:48 PM


Mama's bringing the chicken soup....

Karilea
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I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
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5 posted 2000-12-18 10:56 PM


One of my all-time Nan favs!!! er, is that a chest cold?  
Wilfred Yeats
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6 posted 2000-12-19 01:19 AM


a wool sock - vicks vaporrub and chicken soup - advil cold and sinus - and hot buttered rum - and more tissues - - I've got you covered
Nan
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7 posted 2000-12-19 07:03 AM


Thanks everybody... One third of my class is out sick.. The other two thirds are like hovercraft... sneezing in my face and asking to go to the nurse... I'm OK in the morning - by evening, I can feel this silly bug grabbing me, though...

Thanks for all the drugs & stuff... Deer... It's really all in the head..

Bill Charles
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8 posted 2000-12-19 07:44 PM


Ebbing Nancy,

Ah, Ah, Ah, schnickelfritzen!! Tanks Nan, now I's gouth de codl too!

BCI

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9 posted 2000-12-20 03:37 AM


This is the first time I am reading your peotry and it's hilarious. LOL. I loved it. its so funny and reminds me to stay 'cubbered' as my mom would ask me to.
Bilal

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10 posted 2000-12-20 12:23 PM


Ah, Nan... the title reached out and pulled me in... and the description of your miseries left this gal with the giggles. *G* This is delightful!
Mark Bohannan
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11 posted 2000-12-20 12:45 PM


Now this one is one cute little piece and I am sure that with all those little runny noses, you are finding yourself with a classfull of these butchered syllables. Wonderful write from you.  Have a beautiful and a "GERM FREE" Holiday as you definitely deserve it in so many ways.

A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses.
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shinamoon
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12 posted 2000-12-20 06:34 PM


Nan,

I promise not to cough or sneeze if you promise not to breath in my direction!!!
great poem!!!!

Denise
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13 posted 2000-12-20 08:31 PM


This is too cute, Nan, and describes my condition perfectly this past week. Glad it's almost over with.

Denise

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14 posted 2000-12-20 10:40 PM


Nan~
Hey, this poem is nothing to sneeze at !
Can't see the screen for laughing -
That IS laughter - isn't it ?
OH NO !
Did you hafta sneeze on the monitor ?
Geeeesh !

Just tooooooo cute, Nan~
~*Marge*~



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