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I Come in the Moonlight
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I Come in the Moonlight |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia 
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I come to you in the moonlight I whisper in the wind With haunting softness as is my right And comfort round me trimmed So if I come, I stay awhile Give you cause to make you smile I travel on the moonlight To kiss your lips in dark Gentle caress to give heart flight With love that leaves its mark If I arrive, I come to stay Be with you till the break of day I whisper in the moonlight Sounds of surrender sweet Your shining heart gives off light When this is how we meet If I whisper soft and clear I'll stay till morning finds me here. So look for me in moonlight When the moon is full On moonbeams dance, my soul in flight For passion is the tool That draws me through the moons rays To give you hope for your days I'll come to you by moonlight Though hell shall bar the way For loving in this one full night Hell is the price I gladly pay So if I come by moonlight love, please take me, lift me up above. Religion is for people frightened about going to hell - Spirituality is for people who have been there. Anon. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
I think this is beautiful, Kethry, very well written. jwesley |
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Cassandra Junior Member
since 2000-12-16
Posts 48Charlotte, North Carolina, USA |
So sweet and romantic! Beautifully written from a talented writer. This is just absolutely splendid.. I really loved it! Best wishes to you and happy holidays as well!  --Cassandra |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh my goodness, if all of the Passionate poets start writing like this, I'm going to have to build a whole NEW library, to heck with the annexes! Kethry! This is wonderful! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kethry~ This is just so soft and lovely. 'If I arrive, I come to stay Be with you till the break of day' Ahhhhhhh ... yes ! Your muse is whispering sweet, sweet thoughts. Muchly enjoyed, my dear. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
WHEW!! Hey, Keth..! You are one romantic soul! I love this one...I'm gonna be watching the skies..... |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kethry, Oh love I'm speachless, this is utterly divine, so amazing, truly one of your most romantic and softest yet. Oh how I love it, no one can do it like you  . Utterly exquisitely lovely.Take care love Slushy Miushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
jwesley, thank you for the high praise Cassandra, Thanks for stopping by and responding Sunshine, Well if you can handle the day so wonderfully, the least I can do is take the night shift occasionally Marge, Thank you lovely lady, that the mistress of moonlight should say that, is a compliment indeed 'Deer, Thank you love, I could break a milion moonbeams in my rush to come Marsha, moonlight becomes you, thanks for responding in kind words. Be well Kethry Religion is for people frightened about going to hell - Spirituality is for people who have been there. Anon. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
I thought you WERE the moonlight. Now I am confused. WOW my friend. You have been dipping into the pool of passion for sure and eating the petals from the rose of romance. Loved this one and the visions of you shimmering across the sky. A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses. author unknown |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Mark, If I shimmer it's because of you. Thank you Live long, be strong Kethry Religion is for people frightened about going to hell - Spirituality is for people who have been there. Anon. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
this was gorgeous kethry..write on ha ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Oh my - I'm sooo glad you're back - I really missed these poems |
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shinamoon Junior Member
since 2000-12-07
Posts 15Daytona Beach, usa |
very nice another romantic soul speaks her piece enjoyed it much looking forward to more |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Oh Keth what a most romantic piece, I surely did love reading this one ~HUGS~ Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Victoria, I glad you thought it was georgeous. Thanks. Wil, that you the spirit of romance should respond so, is a pleasure indeed. shinamoon, thank you for stopping by and reading tracie, let's be romantic fools together shall we. Thanks for responding, this is one of my better ones don't ya think. Be well, till death's knell Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Kethry...such beauty and you pen it so softly...love this one |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Paula, thank you so much for responding. Soft smiles. Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Quiet One Junior Member
since 2001-01-01
Posts 46Shhhhh |
Wonderfully written and with such passion |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Love the moonlight, being a moonchild...yes, this was lovely writing, Kethry.. ~softsmiles ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I'd missed this one... so I'm sure glad I have an afternoon to prowl through poetry. *S* This is beautiful! |
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