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snowpants
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0 posted 2000-12-20 12:21 PM


Is it simply
That my heart
Belongs to you?
Is it that
I cannot deny truth?
As much as
I’d like to believe
That the sun sets
In the East,
Where your heart lies,
It will continue
Its everyday routine.



I won't go; I won't sleep; I can't breathe until you're resting here with me...

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Paula Finn
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missouri
1 posted 2000-12-20 12:25 PM


How softly romantic...
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with you
2 posted 2000-12-20 01:40 AM


SP~ yep.....softly romantic is right   Wow.....so very soft.... -SEA
peppermint35
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since 2000-05-28
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3 posted 2000-12-20 02:13 AM


This simply stirs the soul...so lovely

Pepper
"A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth."
Percy Bysshe Shelley

Mark Bohannan
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since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song
4 posted 2000-12-20 02:44 AM


Simply put for such a complex feeling in the heart. Beautiful my friend just as is the heart that wrote it.



A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses.
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jwesley
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
5 posted 2000-12-20 09:17 AM


Soft, gently and warm, my friend.

jwesley

VAS
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since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450
Oregon
6 posted 2000-12-20 09:24 AM


So gently matter-of-fact.  Is is as am.  As long as you are, love is, right?  Beautiful!
Cerenity
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since 2000-02-16
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Escondido-California
7 posted 2000-12-20 09:42 AM


Hi Snowpants,

simply beautiful, enjoyed.

Love, Cerenity


"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)



snowpants
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8 posted 2000-12-20 07:34 PM


Paula:  thank you!  

SEA:  thanks!  I am glad you like it!!  

pepper:  thank you, my friend!  so happy to see you!  

Mark:  well, thank you, my kind friend.  I'm glad you enjoyed this!  

jwesley:  thank you!  I am glad you could stop by!  

VAS:  thank you for your kind words!  I'm glad you liked it!  

Cerenity:  thanks!  I'm glad you enjoyed it!!  

sp


I won't go; I won't sleep; I can't breathe until you're resting here with me...

Poeminister
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since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada
9 posted 2000-12-20 07:37 PM


Lovely write.

Poeminister

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