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Sven
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0 posted 2000-12-19 06:44 PM


                                 angels sing in sky
                            standing on clouds we listen
                               songs of love and light
  bright of sky shines moon     and     moon shines sky of bright
glow cathedral candles stars   light  stars candles cathedral glow
         roof of dark is sky         and        sky is dark of roof
                               songs of love and light
                           standing on mountains we seek
                                angels here on earth


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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl





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Victoria
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1 posted 2000-12-19 06:51 PM


Beautiful sven..nicely done.. she will love it

                ~Victoria~

          


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- Paul Valery (1871-1945)



SEA
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2 posted 2000-12-19 07:12 PM


Sven~ this is really wonderful!   -SEA
Kethry
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3 posted 2000-12-19 07:58 PM


Sven,
Very,very well done.
Keth


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4 posted 2000-12-19 10:21 PM


Another beautiful portrait to hang in the Gallery Sven.  What a lovely tribute to an "angel on earth". Elizabeth is indeed de"light"ful and you have captured such a beautiful aspect of her character. Nicely penned!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

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5 posted 2000-12-19 10:36 PM


The myriad of images presented here in mirror form is remarkable and so Svengali in nature...you Sir, have surpassed yourself...

Karilea
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Sven
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6 posted 2000-12-20 10:49 PM


Thank you all for your words. . .they are very welcome. . .

By the way, with so many Elizabeths around here, I should tell you that this one is for the Elizabeth who is Moderator for Announcements!!!  

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Elizabeth
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7 posted 2000-12-21 03:22 PM


Sven, I am so honored by this beautiful poem...I was hoping that it was for me, but I was afraid it wasn't! This is so sweet, I'm going to have to put it in my library. Thank you so much!  
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