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hoppy
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since 2000-01-27
Posts 271


0 posted 2000-12-19 01:00 PM


Tell me your story
i'll try to look empathetic
The soup's gone cold
you're so pathetic

I'll lend you my ear,
share your insecurities
you can't hide it from me
i know your impurities

I'll share my tongue
sharp and forked long
slashing your throat
with answers you deemed wrong

Slant is all behind us
it's time for truth redeemed
the nights were long
while you perversely dreamed

I'll tell you the story
how you lied repeatedly
turning it around
to dissipate so quickly

Yes i watched you fade
Like night's clock descending
your soul turned cold afraid
while you knelt repenting

--Written by Hoppy
11/6/00


What is it you have to answer?
But to answer you have to ask?
And to ask you have to speak?
And to speak you have to know,
The answer.

© Copyright 2000 Hoppy - All Rights Reserved
kindasorta
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since 2000-12-02
Posts 56

1 posted 2000-12-19 01:18 PM



When your mind returns from walking
absorbing the essence of your self centerness
please deliver a message to it for me.

Tell it when he left he forgot his baggage.
Considers valuable but obsolete to most,
a few odds and end but his reminders remain
as he painted his face as wallpaper, so vain.

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