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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Knew you once, you knew me reaching for us like the sea craving the shore forever more words barely capture this dispair Shadows follow everywhere emptiness reflect within my eyes, without you I die... without you I die... -Tiersdin{R.T.} |
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White Wolf Member
since 1999-09-18
Posts 371Somewhere in the vast wasteland |
Tiersdin, I really enjoyed this piece. I know the feeling and you painted it exactly. Great job. The White Wolf |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Haunting... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
tier, i imagine the speaker crying out loud at heavens above on top of a cliff, reeling from his hurt.... again, you tell more in less words....i enjoyed  |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
words of love's longing for itself...a very beautiful piece, here. |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
White Wolf: *smiles* Thank you! I felt the same way reading your poem. Sunshine: You almost always read and comment on my poems, that means a lot to me! *hugs* Kaile: I could imagine that! Only... you would have to put "her" where you have "his" because the poem truly reflects my own pain... thanks for commenting! *smiles* Serenity: Bless you! *smiles* -Tier |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Great display of emotions tier....great poem! Nathan |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
*smiles* thank you, Nate... -Tier |
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