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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2000-12-19 09:04 AM




Come thee closer, and quietly seek thou my love
‘neath heaven’s choir, with blessings from above


© Copyright 2000 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
serenity blaze
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1 posted 2000-12-19 09:46 AM


as stars to earth in beckoning, "come nearer"
Your eyes a portal for my soul--my mirror.

a_little_girl
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2 posted 2000-12-19 12:54 PM


Something that sparks within,
a pleasure too good to be sin.

Sven
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3 posted 2000-12-19 12:59 PM


A light that doth shine with heavenly bliss
Shining even brighter with each and every kiss

jwesley
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Spring, Texas
4 posted 2000-12-19 01:01 PM


Come closer now, bring thy soul within my grasp,
breathe deep, listen to the song my heart sings,

[This message has been edited by jwesley (edited 12-19-2000).]

kcsgrandma
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Presque Isle, ME
5 posted 2000-12-19 01:11 PM


Come near and step into my soul's warm clasp
And feel the love from which that heart-song springs.

[This message has been edited by kcsgrandma (edited 12-19-2000).]

Rex Allen McCoy
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6 posted 2000-12-19 01:27 PM


Thy hallowed touch ingnites the splendor
within a heart so long suppressed

SEA
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with you
7 posted 2000-12-19 01:35 PM


Release thy love unto me
two hearts beating, for all to see

doreen peri
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8 posted 2000-12-19 01:56 PM


Come thee closer; seek quietly sweet love which timing tests!
Recline with me in sweet refrain, but just make sure you keep your damn hands off of my breasts!

ROFL

i'm sorry, karilea... i couldn't resist...
just forget i was ever here... ok? lol
PPPLLLEEEEAAASEEEE forgive me... hehe     

(hey! i TOLD you i was a mess but you didn't believe me, did you? *SIGH*)


[This message has been edited by doreen peri (edited 12-19-2000).]

Marsha
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9 posted 2000-12-19 02:13 PM


Come and rest in love and peace beside my heart
Winged angel breathe thy sweetness tear not my soul apart

Take care
                 Majestic Mushy Marsha
                              


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



Janet Marie
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10 posted 2000-12-19 02:26 PM


angels play thy heartstrings ... love's   melodic symphony
heart and soul in harmony ... dancing to the tunes of destiny

Victoria
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11 posted 2000-12-19 03:04 PM


O 'tis the softness of thy lips i long to taste
Thence the warmth of thine heart i doth not waste

Interloper
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Deep in the heart
12 posted 2000-12-19 03:51 PM


Sweet words fly from thy mouth unleashed by thy ardor.
Heart tingling from thy words doth make restraint harder.

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


Sunshine
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13 posted 2000-12-19 07:38 PM


and restraint, O, what a tedious word
I would that this love so grand be heard!

jwesley
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14 posted 2000-12-19 09:42 PM


O, hear those bells from distant nell, thou love of mine,
for wedding songs are what they sing, blessed by king and queen,


[This message has been edited by jwesley (edited 12-19-2000).]

Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
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Victoria Australia
15 posted 2000-12-20 02:44 PM


those blessed bells go through my head
would that I could, but love instead


Religion is for people frightened about going to hell - Spirituality is for people who have been there. Anon.


Kethry
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16 posted 2000-12-20 02:47 PM


So softly kiss and darkling glance
I am ready for romance

Sorry the couplet was just too short


Religion is for people frightened about going to hell - Spirituality is for people who have been there. Anon.


Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
17 posted 2000-12-20 02:51 PM


Strings of harp warm this heart beneath the chill
Playing the tune of tremoring words of "Now I will"

Cuddlez
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18 posted 2000-12-20 05:18 PM


Fingers dance across bare skin
Gliding, swaying, and twisting around

Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go.

RainbowGirl
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19 posted 2000-12-20 05:32 PM


For every heart that's made of gold
it beats on memories so I'm told...

Sunshine
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20 posted 2000-12-20 10:59 PM


so come the next time this hits page two
locked against all hearts then be
and then some {revised} poetic majestry
shall come before you all to see...

so should thee come, to add thy line
whist quick, shall soon be quittin' time...


Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




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