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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2000-12-19 07:55 AM


'Sashay Sadie'
~*Marge Tindal*~

When 'Sashay Sadie' went waltzing by
the men would whistle and cheer
She just had the cutest sway
to her derrière

Petticoats a'rustle
the men all would hustle
to catch a glimpse of her bustle
when 'Sashay Sadie' happened by

All the other lassie's
tried to imitate her chassis
but the only one with an ounce of class
was 'Sashay Sadie' when she passed

I know I've heard it said
though I don't remember where it was at
Honey, 'It must be jelly -
cause jam don't shake like that.'







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ethome
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1 posted 2000-12-19 07:59 AM


She shimmies, she shakes, she vibrates like a bowl of jelly on a cool January morning...that sashay Sadie...this ones so cute Marge I loved the chassis line..oh you have more fun than any poet I know Marge
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2 posted 2000-12-19 08:01 AM


I love it Marge, big smiles here!  

"The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest"
~ My Angel.


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3 posted 2000-12-19 10:07 AM


Oh, Marge, I love this!  It is so light and sassy and after my week, I really needed this.  Great      Wonderful  
               love and hugs,
                   ME

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4 posted 2000-12-19 10:14 AM


loved it Marge..another delightful one

                    ~Victoria~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)



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5 posted 2000-12-19 10:18 AM


Oh Oh Oh....I can name on my fingers and toes who's going to come see this Rose...

too cute!  Your imps of muses are delightful!


Karilea
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I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
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6 posted 2000-12-19 07:41 PM


ETHome~
Well ... after 'Silky' hit the page running ...
Sadie just came sashaying along !
Thanks for the always kind reflections of your thoughts.

EagleOne~
You know I LOVE the idea of your face in a smile !
Thank you so much.

MotherEarth~
I'll take that sassy anytime ...
cause that's just how this one felt !
GREAT reply, sweet lady.

Victoria~
I'm just tickled to know you like it.

Karilea~
You know those little muses are playing with me this day ...
And they started soooooooooo early !
Thanks, my friend.
~*Marge*~


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7 posted 2000-12-19 07:45 PM


*LOL*

The way your mind works!   You never cease to surprise and/or amuse me with your writings....

I love the time
and in between
the calm inside me
in the space
where I can breathe...

Sarah McLachlan

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8 posted 2000-12-19 07:48 PM


Marge~

ROFL!!!!!  Too funny!!!  Love that sass!      You have brought a smile to my evening.  Thank you!

LW
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Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats

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9 posted 2000-12-19 08:10 PM


That Sashay Sadie
Ain't no lady!
She's a little tease!!
She tried to get me
To say "Let me!
Pretty, pretty please!!!"

That Sashay Sadie's
Pretty shady
Don't trust her a bit!
Offers wiggles
But gives giggles
Will not part with IT!

Sweet Sashay Sadie
Is a fraidy
Never had a man
I'll show her now
She can purr now
Marge, you know I can!

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10 posted 2000-12-19 08:30 PM


Breathe~
GIRL ! ... 'bout time you got back here !
Thank you kindly for the reply !

LoneWolf~
Oh - it shows ??? LOL !
Just lookie here at Balladeer ! !

Balladeer~

I think I saw you
on the corner -
If you don't quit panting -
you're gonna be a goner !

You want IT ?
Take IT like a man !
I promise to purrrrrrrr ...
if you can !

Been listening for darn-near
one full year ...
to your BLUFF ...
NOW get it in gear ! !  

*grinning* and *sashaying*

~*Marge*~


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11 posted 2000-12-19 09:40 PM


Ha ha ha...loved that last verse! I didn't see what was coming, so it was a good surprise ending!  
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12 posted 2000-12-20 12:27 PM


Sashay with sass... I love it!   Great poem, Marge... and Balladeer... and Marge. *G*
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13 posted 2000-12-20 12:31 PM


OH MY!!!!!!!!

A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses.
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14 posted 2000-12-20 12:39 PM


Marge girl, I know her too. She works on the Gynae ward, and she is an absolute .... devil. And a senior Sister too, just too shocking for words love. At the moment she's walking around with a piece of fake mistletoe tucked in her belt. Yes exactly love  
So you've got yourself linked into our camera system love, because what with 'Dr Silky' and then 'Sister Sadie' you must have. This is priceless, I've got to put this in the Doctors Mess too.
(Oh and they all knew who was 'Doctor Silky')
And he's armed with mistletoe too, but I'm not saying where his is  
Love this I really do, wonderful work
Take care
                 Mushy
                    


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



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15 posted 2000-12-20 01:39 PM


Elizabeth~
Tickled to surprise you !  

Suthern~
Always pleased to know that you're out there peeking in !
Thanks for recognizing the sass !

Marsha~
You DO find the most amusing co-workers
to relate these pieces to ! !
I want to see Dr. Silky's Kisstle-toe !  
~*Marge*~


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In the winds of Cherokee song
16 posted 2000-12-20 01:45 PM


Now talk about being sassy to the point of ignoring a cowboy!!!!!!  Whew.....where is that Silky when you need him?

A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses.
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17 posted 2000-12-20 01:55 PM


MarkB~
Whoops !
Got YOUR attention - didn't she ??????
My response was - LOL @ YOU !
It still is .... lovingly so.

Now - how's THAT for sass ?
~*Marge*~


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In the winds of Cherokee song
18 posted 2000-12-20 01:58 PM


My friend she got my attention before she took that first step.  What with "JAM" for leading the way......the jelly was just a mere overfill but I have over-eaten before and survived.

A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses.
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19 posted 2000-12-20 02:08 PM


Sweet, Sweet MarkB~

In Shashaying Sadie's bustle
she sometimes forgets to check
Now taking time in the hustle
to simply - *HUG* your neck !

Love ya', cowboy.
~*Marge*~




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20 posted 2000-12-20 07:42 PM


Well, that's it, Marge! You've done it now!
I mean that I have had enough!
You make it sound like you want Deer
I'm gonna call your little bluff!

Just keep your eye on Green Swamp Road
You'll see me coming around the bend
And when I get there we'll find out
If you can play or just pretend!!

Your talk is big, my Seminole
Let's see how well you can deliver
You gonna turn tail for the hills
Or will you be an Indian giver???  

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21 posted 2000-12-20 07:53 PM


Bring it on, Balladeer~
On Green Swamp Road I'm waiting.
I'll sit here as I've done before
simply contemplating !

Want you Deer ?
Indeed I do ... Oh, my !
And there'll be no place to run
should you happen by.

Put your money where your mouth is -
I'll show you Indian-Giver
Bring it on up the road -
I promise to deliver !

There's room on this reservation
for another scalp or two -
So if you don't show up THIS time -
I'll have the whole war party out for you !

LOL !
You are a treat !
Love n' lots of hugs.
~*Wild Indian Woman*~




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22 posted 2000-12-20 08:38 PM


Love it when you make me smile.  I don't know why in some cultures the woman walk behind the man when the veiw can be much more interesting when you follow.

If a dream touches us, it exists to us as anything else that touches us.
John


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23 posted 2000-12-20 08:46 PM


JohnR~
Now who's making who smile ???
I like your thinking ! !  
LOL !
Thanks for the reply AND the smile.
~*Marge*~


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24 posted 2000-12-20 10:21 PM


Last time, little Cherokee,
You sent me to a nunnery!
That's not something I can take
Bad habits are too hard to break!

I'll be there soon. Don't be sleepy!
We are gonna rock that teepee!  
I'll bring my own totem pole
To keep your wigwam..soothe your soul.

You beat big drum, my little squaw
Got my heart stuck in your craw
I'm on my way to get my full
And don't give me no Sitting Bull!!!!  


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25 posted 2000-12-21 04:10 PM


HEY!! Don't ignore me, woman!!!  

Where you at.....slurpin' the kickapoo juice?  

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26 posted 2000-12-21 05:39 PM


Aw Yes, my daily Marge smile...    This is tooooo cute... Your imagination is simply amazing...   ~LL~

The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown

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27 posted 2000-12-21 09:26 PM


Okay, Mr. Balladeer~
YELL at me !!!
You can kiss my rear !!!
And wouldn't you just love that!

Now, where were we ??

I'll be your little Cherokee
Rescue you from the nunnery -
Don't worry bout the wigwarm
It will be hot !

But there's just one thing puzzles me
'Bout your totem pole ...
I've heard the stories of weakened knees
How much further can you crawl  ?

I know you'd want to be braggin'
but wouldn't that totem pole be dragging ??????

'Twixt The Swamp and The Everglades
I hear there's love so tender -
so come on up, Full-O-Bull -
Isurrender !
~*WOMAN-With-Warm-WigWam*~





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28 posted 2000-12-21 09:51 PM


Hehehe, how cute Marge!  Sadie is my dog's name, so the title drew me in, lol...and I'm glad it did!  Great writing, my friend!  

*Krista Knutson*

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29 posted 2000-12-22 11:56 AM


Glad you gave equal time to the female gender, Marge!  Love the last bit especially.  Enjoyed much!


Corinne

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30 posted 2000-12-23 10:54 PM


Another cute one from you...  
Deb  

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31 posted 2000-12-24 01:41 PM


Krista~
Tee-Hee !
Gotta love that pup !

Corinne~
It always so good to see you here smiling !

BloomingRose~
Thanks for letting me know you enjoyed it.
~*Marge*~


MERRY CHRISTMAS



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32 posted 2002-03-13 11:44 AM


LOL !
Doing a little archiving and turned up this little piece
of absolute fun and frivolity~

And for Balladeer -
'still crazy, after all these years'

What fun -
what delight -
Never did catch me
on the right night~

Many times I called YOUR bluff
and that's just what it was
So quit your screaming me-me's
and come give me a buzz !
Well, that's pretty cheeky~

**Couldn't keep from laughing at all the neat replies !
What fun it is to archive~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~



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