Open Poetry #11 |
Passions Ember |
EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
A smile A knowing look A whispered word Passions ember flares ~*~ A kiss A breath of love An inviting movement Burning anticipation ~*~ A touch A velvet caress The flame rises Passions embraced ~*~ A gasp A seductive whimper As lust beckons Souls ablaze ~*~ A sigh A sated desire The lingering glow Divine fulfillment "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
EagleOne~ Oooooohhhhhhhhh, my gawd ! This one is definitely smoldering ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Marge ~ This one was supposed to slip quietly through. Smoldering perhaps, but not too hot. "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Man those are beautiful glowing emders flowing down that page.."Passions embraced"......."souls ablaze." and then of course..."Divine fulfillment." great stuff! |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Sounds good to me ha...nice one Eddie ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
ahh poet from down under ...your warming up these cold winter days here... wonderful romantic verses of desire like seeing this side of your writing..even if you are blushing later-fate and destiny-gator jm Some people find subtlety in strangers if you find anything~let me in Your eyes~you see everything my eyes~I see it all together now~and I know |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
oh my.....oh my......these are HOT love it.....mmmm......yes I love it. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh**sigh**sigh* very warm and inviting. I loved them and the wonderful way they made me feel. Much love to you from me http://www.geocities.com/karenltorbiak/StartimesPoetry.html |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
ethome ~ Thankyou so much for stopping bye to add your thoughts, much appreciated! Victoria ~ You reply has given me a smile Glad you enjoyed. Janet ~ Just doing my bit to try and bring some warmth and comfort Once again I thankyou for your kind comments. I did enjoy doing this and only blushed a little. Charisma ~ I'm so glad you like it. Startime ~ Warm and inviting is the feeling I was looking for. Wonderful to know I could convey that to you. "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
This is sensual to say the least! -SEA |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
EagleOne, My, my, what a poem you have written!!! Passionate and full of heat!! WOOHOO!! Nice job, Eagle. I knew it was in there somewhere. LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Amazing what an Aussie can hide under his Angel Wings and.........blush????? yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa Right LOL I'd say you wear the color well my friend... excellent writing~ |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
HEHEHE now dont you go getting all shy and innocent there guy...after this... well Im not gonna say it hehehe...sizzling here now |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Sea ~ That was the feeling Glad you enjoyed! Lone Wolf ~ Yes you did, didn't you. It was just a matter of channeling the feelings. Thankyou! Buterfly ~ It was one of those moments when the devil inside gained control . Such a lovely shade though, I think it definately is my colour lol. I thankyou my friend, take care! Paula ~ Shy, sweet, and innocent, yep! that's me. < !signature--> "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. [This message has been edited by EagleOne (edited 12-20-2000).] |
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