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Bittersweet Release
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Bittersweet Release |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Bittersweet Release ~*Marge Tindal*~ Torrential downpour Moisture-emoted regrets Lay upon my cheek No longer confined To the confines of my heart Flood-gates opening Bittersweet release Saturating memories Blooming in my heart ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
I am in awe Marge! Happy, sad, bittersweet, you do it all so well. "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Such beautiful tears you weep Lady Marge... |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
YUP YUP, I was weary I'd need a box of kleenex when opening this one sweetie... I'm left with a sigh upon reading your poem as it spoke volumes to me... Thank you for the read PoetFriend a great write from your heart and pen... |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Release no matter how it comes is so much a part of our lives and those bittersweet ones can really drain the soul. Wonderfully presented my friend. hugs and love to you. A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses. author unknown |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
EagleOne~ Now YOU leave me in Awwwwww !  LOL ... and I thank you, sir. Paula~ I thank you. Got any Visine ?  Dani~ I've been in that sandbox again ! Musta' got sand in my eyes ! Thank you, sweetie. MarkB~ Well, I sure pulled the plug on this one !  Loving you right back ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Ramses Junior Member
since 2000-12-14
Posts 40Porsgrunn, Telemark, Norway |
Marge... I just want to say that you have become some of an idol to me in a way. The way you write about so many different aspects of life in such a majestic way leaves me standing with my little poetic hat in my hand looking up at you... Keep `em coming my friend -Ramses- |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I take a dip in that pool from time to time......wonderful Marge -SEA |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Margie~ So beautifully written and so tenderly put together....sad, lovely read hon ~HUG~ Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I suppose its all interrelated the pain, the frustration and disappointments but when I feel regrets it really gets my attention...James |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Ramses~ Why, thank you so much for the sweet comments. I think I can't help writing with a lot of variety - I do have a bushel of muses to contend with. It pleases me to know that it pleases you. SEA~ I hear that ! I'm giggling at a SEA in a pool ! Tracie~ Yes it is sad - but there are sad hearts out there that need to be heard. Thank you for hearing them, sweetie. JamesL~ Yeah ... mine too. Thank you, James. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Marge~ Written with such tenderness and love . . . why does it always have to be bittersweet? *sigh* Beautiful my friend. LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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