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maxtec1
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0 posted 2000-12-19 01:16 AM



Strength of a Man
By Richard Maxfield
4-13-2000


Strength of a man
lays not with in his arms
but in his love and kindness
ability to do no harm

his measure power
is not in his command
it lays with in compassion
tenderness of his hand

its not how well he fights
busting peoples heads
but in the care he shows
when his wife he beds

its not the weight he lifts
with arms to impress
its getting up early
to help his child get dressed

his power comes not from money
he works so hard to earn
the softness in his eyes
healing all life’s burns

crushing physical strength
does not a strong man make
its rather what he gives
not what he can take

copyright #RM99R4

© Copyright 2000 Richard Maxfield - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2000-12-19 01:19 AM


Amen........
CocoBaci
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2 posted 2000-12-19 01:49 AM


in the care he shows
when his wife he beds

its getting up early
to help his child get dressed

its rather what he gives
not what he can take
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Now the above quotes which I highlight just had me caught up in a sigh...

Thank you for an enjoyable read...

coco

Cuddlez
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3 posted 2000-12-19 01:51 AM


). Now isnt this true...
Poeminister
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4 posted 2000-12-19 01:54 AM


Wonderful write.  Well said.

Poeminister

Cassandra
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5 posted 2000-12-19 02:54 AM


God Bless you for this. Truth lies in all of this so well. Thank you so much for sharing.


--Cassandra

John R
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6 posted 2000-12-19 02:56 AM


Words of wisdom!!!  A lesson many men could benefit from. Well written and enjoyed.

If a dream touches us, it exists to us as anything else that touches us.
John


Lady Lightning
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7 posted 2000-12-19 03:43 AM


Very good, Richard...  I could see your strength in this one...   ~LL~  

The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown

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8 posted 2000-12-19 04:04 AM


Richard, this really touched my heart. thank you for sharing it.

*hugs*
snow

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