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John R
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0 posted 2000-12-19 01:04 AM



Screaming in my Dreams

Eyes, like fires in the night, ever burning.
Igniting flames of deepest, dark desire.
Memories, the passion in their yearning.
Screaming in my dreams, I burn for their fire.

Lips, like petals of the rose, inviting.
How tempting, the softness of their warm touch.
To taste them, ever so brief, exciting.
Screaming in my dreams, I want them so much.

Arms, that comfort, tenderly embracing.
Holding on to me tight, the dream I know.
Moments, memories keep my heart racing.
Screaming in my dreams, never let me go.

If a dream touches us, it exists to us as anything else that touches us.
John


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SEA
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1 posted 2000-12-19 01:15 AM


I know this exactly, completely, and perfectly.........do I ever........Hugs to you   -SEA
CocoBaci
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2 posted 2000-12-19 01:27 AM



JOHN, your write is filled with such passionate energy...

Truly captivating from begining to end...

Excellent poem my friend I really enjoyed the read...

coco

Lady Lightning
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3 posted 2000-12-19 04:02 AM


Ah yes, I get three in one night now...  
Just as wonderful as the others...I just hope you aren't hurting for anyone, and that these are only wonderful thoughts you are having...    ~LL~


The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown

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4 posted 2000-12-19 04:11 AM


from the title to the last word, this was a very well written, full of longing, passionatly expressed piece ......one i enjoyed reading very much.

snow

John R
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5 posted 2000-12-19 04:26 AM


Sea~I'm still screaming

Coco~Passion is my middle name Thanks!

Lady~ Hurting?  OH Yes! Every waking moment.

Snow~ Thank you for reading and the kind words.


If a dream touches us, it exists to us as anything else that touches us.
John


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