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Screaming in My Dreams
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Screaming in My Dreams |
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John R Member
since 2000-12-14
Posts 141Toledo OH 
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Screaming in my Dreams Eyes, like fires in the night, ever burning. Igniting flames of deepest, dark desire. Memories, the passion in their yearning. Screaming in my dreams, I burn for their fire. Lips, like petals of the rose, inviting. How tempting, the softness of their warm touch. To taste them, ever so brief, exciting. Screaming in my dreams, I want them so much. Arms, that comfort, tenderly embracing. Holding on to me tight, the dream I know. Moments, memories keep my heart racing. Screaming in my dreams, never let me go. If a dream touches us, it exists to us as anything else that touches us. John |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I know this exactly, completely, and perfectly.........do I ever........Hugs to you  -SEA |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
JOHN, your write is filled with such passionate energy... Truly captivating from begining to end... Excellent poem my friend I really enjoyed the read... coco |
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Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
Ah yes, I get three in one night now... Just as wonderful as the others...I just hope you aren't hurting for anyone, and that these are only wonderful thoughts you are having... ~LL~The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
from the title to the last word, this was a very well written, full of longing, passionatly expressed piece ......one i enjoyed reading very much. snow |
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John R Member
since 2000-12-14
Posts 141Toledo OH |
Sea~I'm still screaming Coco~Passion is my middle name Thanks! Lady~ Hurting? OH Yes! Every waking moment. Snow~ Thank you for reading and the kind words. If a dream touches us, it exists to us as anything else that touches us. John |
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